Dear Celestia, I Love You

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PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #1 · Nov 15th, 2017 · · 1 ·

Very good.

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #2 · Nov 15th, 2017 · · ·

Absolutely Perfect!!

wendell hodges

wendell hodges #3 · Nov 15th, 2017 · · ·

wunderbar

Speedy Silverstreak

Speedy Silverstreak #4 · Nov 15th, 2017 · · ·

I don't mind foalcon but when the main character has my name.....

I'll guve it a like at least

Apollyon

Apollyon #5 · Nov 16th, 2017 · · ·

(insert the Shrek intro)

"Yeah, like that's ever gonna happen."

SOMEBODY-

Texus

Texus #6 · Nov 16th, 2017 · 1 · ·

I admit it is short, but I don't know why there are so many donvotes, afterall there is a lot of worse shit out there and in the incest department too,

"I'm sorry you had to see me like this, my dear colt", she said without any hesitation, as she was embarrassed that she was being watched by him, "Usually by this time of year, my heat is sated by you and Fairy's father Sombra. Sadly enough, he is away in Zebrica, aiding your dear elder sister with peace talks".

yeah well not a fan of that shipping and I'm kind of tired of the main char having a sister or many friends that are so much stronger than him that he would never stand a chance. I mean an alicorn is probably nearly a guarantee for her to become stronger (his sister).

okay I thought the downvotes where only there because of this being a mother x son fanfiction, but this is short and it "nearly" looks like one of those stories where the author isn't really trying to make it look good. You should probably have it streched out a bit more for one.

Cadaver21