Meet Maverick, a 19-year old motorcycle racer as he meets the Main 7 and becomes good friends with them. As they get to know him better, he shows them what he does for a living. (There's a human Starlight Glimmer and she's friends with the Main 7 and Trixie's there too)
Awesome!
I love this story but unfortunately I'm more stock car and autosports than motorcycles.
Fifth Generation of racing right here
That's cool, I like 4-wheel and 2-wheel racing
To be honest, I'm not a big fan of both my intros, Any suggestions to improve it?
Awesome!
Would ATVs qualify as bikes?
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Nah, I'm dealing with proper motorcycles. Besides, I don't think ATVs go on circuits
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I figured it was circuits. My uncle IRL used to do that.
I was thinking motocross
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You know. If 4 speed and crrw need a place to work on bikes my OC has a custom shop in Canterlot they could work in. He actually has a custom BMW 1100R that has been extremely modified. Stretched rear swingarm with a large street slick on the rear. Sequential 6 speed transmission. And a modified Harley Davidson four stroke engine that pumps 350hp.
Cool! I'll consider it
What's his name?
Glad to see 4 Speed liked Avaraus. Maybe my chopper has a chance at the circuit. She's a great all around bike but is shit in offroad.
I call #71
Why is the four in 4-Speed typed as the number and not the word?
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He was a character from the early MLP generation and that's how his name was written
Pikes Peak.
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Too long and not really a proper closed circuit
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But still a good test of reaction times and handling blind corners. I always wanted to go there and It's my dream to compete in the annual hill climb.
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Maybe I can use that as an exhibition event like Goodwood FoS
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Or maybe when they get home Speedy decides to take them and some cars and bikes up to PP for them to practice
Why is there an Equestria Girls tag and a human tag?
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Whoops, my bad. This is kinda my first story so I'm still a bit of a rookie regarding things like this
Darn...
My guy didn't make it....
Oh well!
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There's always the next race
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Nah, my racer was voidheart he didn't make it at all.
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There were many names and I had to limit them to 20
Sorry
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No worries
And now the nightmare up next for both Speedy and 4 Speed.
Nice to see that you used past racing history for our characters and their problems. Granted I'm a little confused due to the fact the Le Mans disaster was in 1955. But I'm gonna go on a lomb and say you made it more recent for story purposes.
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yep! spot on
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Ok
Next stop: China then Goodwood. Afterwards: SSCC..........maybe
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Goodwood I'll save for the mid-season break
What's SSCC? I'm not familiar with it
Excuse me.... but why is this story even in the Canterlot Adventures Group? I'm pretty sure it has nothing to do with the Group. :/
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Don't look at me, I didn't add it
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Then who did?
Maybe they should go the GTA option for this journalist.
Hang him out the side of a moving helicopter till he pisses himself.
Goes to show money won't save your ass from the track. Just imagine if this was GRC, he'd turn the track into a demolition derby
Maverick... Is that by any chance Maverick Vinales?
Well, apart from that, it's so far a good read!
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Maybe... He's my favourite rider
Its just the name
Losail, Philip Island and Laguna Seca
Also, is it too late to submit an OC?
I see you're doing the rider's championship, but why aren't you doing the team's championship?
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Nah, you can send in one
just PM me the details
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Would be a little too complicated, plus I haven't sorted out the other riders into teams. So I just kept the focus on the rider's championship
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Oh, I see!
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I'm using the PM you sent to me, when you wanted to add your OC to my story.
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I literally thought that the Le Mans Disaster was just a plot point for this story, but when I searched it up I didn't realize it was real!
Also, Mercedes Benz left the racing circuit until 1989.
Oh boy. Oh boy. OH BOY!!!!!! The Shanghai Track is here!