Tempest groaned as she stirred, her mind feeling oddly full of fluff. It was hard to focus...but that didn't feel bad. It felt rather nice, actually. She could just accept the world, embrace it filled with childish delight and wonder as she stared up at her Papa-
She ground that thought to a halt as firmly as she could, focusing and sorting through her thoughts. It took time, but she was able to pull herself free of the sense of childish wonder and glee...and recognized it for what it was as she saw the Minions staggering around like they'd never seen their own hands before. The Overthought connection was complete. She was the Minions' Queen now, and for the first time in their lives - in the history of their species - they were truly whole. It changed everything about them, from the way their thoughts flowed to their view of each other...to the purity of the scents in the air. It was as though the whole lot of them had been reborn in the moment of the connection, and were seeing everything for the first time.
She looked up at Gru as he stood over her. "Are you certain she's alright, Nefario?" he asked worriedly.
"Just a little dazed, I'm sure," the doctor assured him. "It was quite a jolt to her brain, after all."
"Well, if you're certain..." Gru allowed as he leaned forward. Tempest felt herself snuggling into her Papa's embrace as he lifted her up-
Once again, she jerked her head back from that thought. She was a grown mare, whatever her body. That was the whole point of her decision with Barry! Why were her thoughts constantly reverting back to childish nature? Why did her mind keep trying to make Gru Papa?
<Because you are a child,> Barry told her softly, his own voice still filled with awe as he stared up at the unicorn horn he wore on his head. <That's what you wanted, to be able to grow as a child without giving up the responsibility that came with your memories, and the duty you were taking. So we're helping you do that. You will still be you...but you can enjoy being a child, and as we all become accustomed to the Overthought, we will grow with you.> He smiled towards Gru. <And every child needs a parent...and quite a few of us see him like a father.>
Tempest thought about that for a time. She could pull herself out of the Overthought whenever she wanted to stop the childish thinking. She was aware of how it was affecting her thinking. And...she did want to be a child again, after all. And she was going to be raised by Gru, hopefully as more a sister to the girls than a pet...in which case there was nothing especially wrong to seeing him as Papa...
...and unlike her real one, he didn't reject her for her mutilation...
She quickly pushed that thought and memory back...and felt the Overthought swallow it, helping her to push it from her mind as she settled into Papa's hold as he carried her back upstairs. She made a decision then. She might think of him as Papa...but once she started talking, she'd call him Gru just like the girls did. She needed to remind herself that she was more than just the child she was letting herself be-
...they would understand her when she started talking, wouldn't they? There wouldn't be a language barrier? Or...or would there be a language barrier when she went back to Equestria instead?
As she felt Papa's hand stroking her mane, she let those thoughts fade for now. Until she actually started talking, those questions were a non-issue. It was time to meet her sisters and see what life would be like.
Tempest did her best to hold onto her lunch as Agnes swung her around shrilling excitedly. The little filly definitely regretted that ponies had stronger hearing than humans. The other girls and Papa may have been wincing, but it was all Tempest could do not to kick Agnes in the gut to get her to stop screaming before her ears started bleeding-
"Agnes!" Papa suddenly snapped out, catching the girls attention and making her fall silent. "Do you think you could keep it down?"
"But she's a real live unicorn and she's staying with us forever and ever and SHE'S SO FLUFFY!" Agnes shrieked out, making Tempest wince as she lifted her hoofs to try and pull her ears down.
"My, what big ears she has," Margo pointed out dramatically as she reached out to hold them down for Tempest.
"The better to hear you with, my dear!" Edith growled wickedly, a very wolfish grin on her face.
Agnes' eyes went wide. "Ohhh...sorry," she whispered to Tempest, leaning in to kiss each of her ears. "What's her name?" she asked Papa much more calmly. "Do I get to name her?"
"She already has two names," Gru explained readily. "It appears she is something of a...mare of mystery." He chuckled at what he saw as a joke. "Her names are Fizzlepop Berrytwist-"
"Fizzie!" Agnes squealed happily before quickly bringing her voice back down. "Sorry, Fizzie..."
Tempest wriggled her ears around to stop the ringing.
"-and Tempest Shadow," Gru concluded dramatically.
"Oooh!" Edith purred eagerly as she leaned in towards her. "I'm going to like you, Tempest..."
Tempest managed a smile. She was right that Edith was going to be fun.
"So what does she eat?" Margo asked curiously. "It's been a couple of weeks, so I assume she's been fed down there..."
Gru blinked in surprise. "I...honestly hadn't thought about that," he admitted apologetically. "I suppose Barry and the others took care of that..."
<Fruit and vegetables!> Bob offered happily, holding up a bowl of mashed carrots and bananas.
Agnes immediately grabbed the bowl and spoon and began feeding Tempest. "Say 'ah', Fizzie!" she instructed excitedly.
Rolling her eyes with a smile, Tempest opened her mouth wide...and nearly choked as Agnes shoved the spoon practically into her throat. Reacting instinctively, she focused her magic and the spoon went flying across the room to embed itself in the wall before bursting into flame and letting off colorful sparks like miniature fireworks.
"Ooooh!" Agnes and Edith cooed in awe.
"Maybe I should feed her," Margo suggested carefully, accepting a new spoon from Mel and carefully putting it into Tempest's mouth, letting her pull the food off the spoon.
So can Tempest make Lemons combustible?
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If so, she and Gilda from My Little Killing Machine will get along swimmingly.
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Cave Johnson approves this request.
As do I.
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Combustible fruit. Exactly what the world needs
This ending scene cannot be seen by any Equestrian or Tempest's tough reputation will be scrambled to pieces.
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Let's just hope they don't burn someone elses house down. Or theirs for that matter
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Be careful, she'll burn your house down.
First order for her minions will be getting some decent earplugs, living with Agnes will be torture otherwise.
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How do we know that that hasn't happened already? (I mean Gru had a disintegrator ray in plain sight)
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Well excuse me for trying to doublespeak Murphy into submission.
Nice chapter, I can'T say anything bad about the story so far I believe, well beside the question about the minions or how you see them.
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Please we already have one pwny with combustible lemon we dont need another....we WANT one
A wolfish grin. (Chuckle) I see what you did there.
Wait... Two unicorns?.... Who is the other one? If Tempest is the first one... who is the second one?
So, Tempest DID make Cave Johnson’s wish come true... somehow.
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Small error here, used "their" instead of "there" which is correct.
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Gru, apparently. It's a reference to the end of the first movie according to Tats.
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This was answered in a previous chapter comments.
And the end of the first Despicable Me.
Gru's nose is actually a unicorn horn.
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I literally just watched the movie today and it was actually adorkable. Dorky, but adorable at the same time. Despicable Me, indeed. Hehehe...
Gru is gonna make a fine Papa for Tempest Fizzle–as I'll refer to her for this fic's comment section, seeing as how she really is both now–and I am eagerly awaiting the shenanigans here. Tatsurou, my friend, hit us with everything ya got and don't you dare hold back! I've been saying it all along and I'll keep on doing it: you were born to write!
Their wouldn't be a language barrier
1. There.
Well that was a fruitful first interaction with the girls. We'll just have to wait and see how much she'll be spoon fed. Hopefully things won't go up in flames so soon...
Err...
Maybe I missed something, but is her horn fixed?
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Check the end of the last chapter.
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Yes. It was repaired at the end of the last chapter.
Tempest and Minions, vs Chrysalis and Changelings.
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I’m glad that shock didn’t turn her into a vegetable! Or worse: mush!
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Elaborate, please.
9036153 Remember in Portal 2 how Cave Johnson made an epic speech against life? Well, Tempest managed to somehow make her food explode using her magic.
9036120 This battle will pretty much boil down to how they treat their army, so I know who’s gonna win.
The amount of possible shenanigans. It's too much. It's scary and exciting.
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That fact that Tempest will treat her minions with love guarantees her the win?
Hmm, something is missing from the minions. Can they still use minion speech sometimes, like when talking to someone other than Tempest?
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So what you’re saying is that she made a breakthrough for the abilities necessary to make a combustible lemon 🍋 that would burn down houses?
Nice! 🌟
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Would you rather have minions that HAVE to die for you or minions that WANT to die for you? I feel Chrysalis might get a few turncoats once they’re connected to Tempest.
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Heh that would be amusing.
Tempest: "Come join the Minion side! We have cookies made with love!"
Ah, the beginning of a beautiful story. I'm going to enjoy the fluff before the inevitable plot. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
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They still are using Minion speech constantly. Tempest is just getting the translations.
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I know. But the translation isn't necessary on screen for her to understand them. Like when the food was brought out for her, we would have known what it was for without the translation because of how it was presented.
the poor spoon was murdered by a magical unicorn pony. No one will believe her if she tells anyone.
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I do it that way because I don't want to have to struggle with the Minion Translation site again.
You had my curiosity. But now, you have my attention.
Let's see where this rabbit hole goes, shall we?
Woo! A chapter!
And I totally want to see her take over the Changeling swarm too. Or ARE the Minions actually changelings? That would be awesome!
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You think that one is hard? Try the Skyrim translators from English to Dovhanese. The dragon language has several blanks to it, so good luck making a Thu'um of your own, let alone a dovh OC.
That world-building makes so much SENSE, and is, of course, making my eyes moist.
Best single sentence of this fic so far.
Anyone think of fan art to reveal the completed minion based off this? would probably like to see what the warrior minions look like since the experiments were on a completed minion.
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The "completed" Minions (the ones linked to the complete Overmind) don't look any different than regular Minions. They just make fewer messes.
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So they’re completely different?