A pony Wakes up in a Planecrash Not knowing who he is or where he came from let alone his name. We follow His story to find out who he is and how he got into equestria and how he knows so much about survival and yet can't remember himself about who he is.
Its my First FanFic Ever And i would really like it if people could give me tips on how to make it more intresting. Its a little like a mystery and some romance will be put in there because i've been feeling 'Fru-Fru' This week and feel that it's a good idea that i should put some Fru-fru into everything i write.
Yes I know that the First chapter is sub-optimal and that'll get fixed when I Get time to sit down and Write some more Into it.
Special thanks to MrNumbers (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/MrNumbers)
Protips:
"Now I know that the first Chapter Sucks-"
So don't upload it until it's been edited. This is the only chance your fanfic is going to get on the front page and if the story really does improve later you should write those later chapters before uploading.
Now I know that the first Chapter Sucks And I can do something about that, I will when i can be bothered to Throw some more dialogue or some more into the plot just I'll do it when I have the motivation
This is probably the worst desciption you could possibly give. It tells me nothing about the story and if I did like it after reading it it makes me think there would be a massive wait for unedited chapters.
EDIT: Removed unnecessary-ness.
This sounds mean but the internet lacks tone. Keep writing bro.
972644 dude this is his first shot at writing a story. lay off!
973155 That isn't really an excuse. He didn't really try, just look at his "description".
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It'll get Better as i go on, But I Just don't have the Motivation right now to make it better, The wait will only be a few days as I'm Writing the second chapter right now, But only slowly as School teachers don't really accept Writing a story at my school even my english teacher, Wow. It's cool though, It'll get better i swear.
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Hey Man, I'm trying come on, I'm not as good with long stories and i critisise everything about everything i don't think it'll be up to my Expectations but it well get better over time, You'll see, ALL YOU HATERS WILL SEE!
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HAHAHAHA, I have no idea.