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My Little Pony: The Forgotten Tales of Birdboy

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Acoustic Pulse #1 · Apr 8th, 2019 · · · Wake up Birdboy ·

Decent start. Few grammatical errors.

Saw some dialogue where the it was like:

He saw a bunch of birds land right next to him as they were chirping at him. "Look at him guys, a bird mutant with arms and legs." One of them said.

It should say:

"Look at him, guys, a bird mutant with arms and legs," one of them said.

That's just one example, I could pick this apart all day. Proofread.

draph91

draph91 #2 · Apr 9th, 2019 · · · Wake up Birdboy ·

Oh boy this won’t end well

Never heard of the film before now

also because of this I have looked it up and it seems interesting, I hope you update this again one day, I imagine him becoming friends with Fluttershy

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