The griffin kingdom has taken equestria and imprisoned Celestia and the main six. They failed to capture Luna and she fled to the north. She passes out from blood loss and wakes up somewhere strange.
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I like Luna. I like MLP. And I like blood.
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Are these anthro ponies if so please state it in the tags or description that would make it easier on readers
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I don’t know what anthro means.
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It means for example Luna would still look like Luna but have a more human appearance this image link should provide a sufficient example
https://derpibooru.org/1688112?q=princess+luna
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No, their all exactly the way they are seen in the show. Except Luna’s mane and tail are the same color as when she first appears but a bit longer. The ponies of Donladur wear clothing unlike the ponies of equestria. So no, this isn’t anthro.
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Okay now I have clarity
Awww. thank you, that is one of the nicest comments I have ever gotten.
Need More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I’m trying to come up with some but I’ve run dry on ideas for this at the moment.
Hmmmm. Gettin dwarf fortress vibes.
EEE!! MORE!!
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It'l be a while but there will be more
is that a pic from the dragon age dwarf city
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No idea. I found it on a Google search.
I'm trying to figure out why Luna wouldn't simply demand an audience with the leader of this underground nation. I could understand if she would desire to remain incognito in an effort to take stock of the underground before revealing herself, but if so, then that should be articulated to the reader in some fashion. There has to be a reason for Luna wanting her status as an alicorn to remain a secret, otherwise this makes no sense.
Not to be nitpicky here, but forging is rarely the last step in making a sword. It's nearly impossible to make a perfect blade with hammer and anvil alone. Usually the rough shape is formed with the hammer and anvil, and the finishing is done either with a belt sander (modern) or by hand using emory paper (modern-traditional) or by using gritty stone (traditional).
Okay... only problem is that she's literally an immortal alicorn. If she introduced herself as a foreign diplomat, it's reasonable to assume that the king would at least hear her out.
29 swords in a day?!? What kind of war are they preparing for? Most modern bladesmiths put out maybe one sword every few weeks! Yeah yeah, pony magic and all that, but still.