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Mars attacks!

Mars Attacks!

Princess Celestia laughed as the last of humanity was destroyed by her barrier,It had been nice to win and have everything go as planned,it had taken months and her conversion bureaus had been such a hit with humans that wanted a change of life,but soon others noticed those who where converted not only became a pony but also lost the ability to show any 'negative' trait such as anger or sadness,and only smiled largely and praised Celestia.

With all humans dead or turned into new foals she sat back in her throne and looked out a window to the sky of New Equis,the sun was just around midday,she wondered what she should do now before the day was over since she has some time to kill.
Unknown to her beings on a red planet where watching her invasion and laughing at how easily the humans where killed,abit it sounded more like 'Ak ak ak's' rather than normal speach.

A martian in a large purple and gold robe started 'ak aking' at martians in green space suits with a large glass dome over there heads with a large red tank on there back,all of them carrying weapons that looked like toy laser guns you'd see in the 50's.
The martian soldiers marched into there saucers that then took off and headed for Earth,or 'New Equis' and already ponies and new foals alike had set up monuments to Princess Celestia's might,soon the sky turned black and all ponies looked up,only to see thousands upon thousands of flying saucers.

Celestia Looked at the saucers before she activated her shield spell again,and to her surprise it fizzled out the second it came into contact with the saucers.
The Martain king looked down from a large mothership style saucer,he was sitting in a chair before he gave the signel to land.

Princess Celestia watched a large grey saucer,far bigger than the rest,land near her castle and the bottom opened up as twenty martian troops marched out in a row of ten each and parted way as there king walked through to Celestia before making a circle motion with his arm. "Ak ak!" He spoke in high pitched ak's,like every martian.

After a moment Celestia's horn light up yellow as she tried to cast a translation spell on the king,only for the troops to pull out there laser weapons and shoot at her and her guards,she threw up a shield,her guards however where not so lucky and when hit by the beam of there weapons turned everything but there bones to dust and leaving bones colored green,blue,or red.

Celestia's eyes and horn glew bright with power as she floated into the air and started using solar beams to shoot saucers out of the skies of her new planet.
For every saucer that she shot down ten more took its place,she was forced to watch as the aliens used some of the monuments to crush her little ponies,strangely enough they got along with the new foals and rode a few of them into battle as they shot there energy weapons turning more of her guards to bones.

The martians laughed as they crushed ponies using there own monuments of one they saw as a goddess that could move the sun,they gave no shits as they killed off ponies and took selfies of them standing in front of burning or blown up monuments.

The martian king wiped out his laser pistol and shot Celestias barrier causing it to shatter from the constant fire of the alien's weapons,he calmly walked up to her,put the barrel of his weapon to her head,and pulled the trigger,and this Celestia knew no more and equinity was killed off or used for random experiments like attaching the head of a pony to the body of a dog.

Author's Note:

short and random i know,but its like the movie so enjoy

Comments ( 13 )

How about The Thing from John Carpenter's The Thing for the next chapter?

lol how tf did you guess i was gonna put that in one of the chapters!?!?!? XD

8966692
Why? That's all anyone writers. It's beating a dead horse. And beating the dead horse's dead rider.

You should try one of the endgame crisis species in Stellaris their really tough to kill or one of the leviathans in the game like this guy

stellaris.paradoxwikis.com/images/e/e3/Evt_stellarites.png

vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/vsbattles/images/e/ef/Stellarite_Devourer.png/revision/latest?cb=20170206051512

can you use the Combine?

10162213
this story is long finished, however, if you can tell me about them in detail, maybe I will, maybe I won't *shrugs*

10162223
https://combineoverwiki.net/wiki/Combine
(you can read the other stuff later, focus on the combine troops)

The idea is amusing.

But oh God please take some writing lessons and get a proof reader! The grammar was painful, the spelling bad, and flow utterly absent even within the same paragraph. Frankly this is a case of pure bad writing and you are not getting better between chapters.

11330799
Maybe learn not to be an asshole, and read my more modern stories. That being said I did improve with time, try my new empire series

11330799
Alright so, Its much later here now and I'm actually (awake) and not drop dead tired at a party I didn't want to be at. While I would agree with you normally, that my old writing sucks ass. You'd really outta take a look at my latest work (a new empire home at last) to see the upgrade in quality over my older, more primitive stories

11445381
WOTW is “War Of The Worlds”

11445381
Also I don’t know how to send links 💀

11445392
just copy the link an paste it in a comment lmfao

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