• Member Since 20th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen May 17th, 2015

MrTyreste


I love MLP, and I love writing. Hoping to read some awesome stuff here. :)

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Rainbow Dash is careless, so careless that she destroys the post office in one of her "awesome" stunts. So when she is sentenced to community service at a retirement home, she begins to hate how uncool it is.

But when she meets a certain pegasus, that changes for good.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

interesting, but short. and the story was a bit too fast. i like the consept however xD.

Not a bad short story, but the ending seems a little to rushed and forced.

969714 I know it was rushed, but I was kind of in a hurry to get it done.

I :pinkiehappy: Rainbow Dash Stories

Hmmm...........

Hmm..............

Good concept, though it was rushed, which you've been tolld before.

Also, your characterisation is a little...off.....

Don't think a celebrity would hug a pony she barely knew.

... Dashie wants to be a hat?

Sarcasm aside, this is a good story here mate.

first i was like :pinkiegasp:... what an ass.:twilightangry2:
then i was like :fluttershysad: poor old guy

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