Princess Celestia sends Twilight Sparkle and her friends to investiage dragon activity in the Smokey Mountains. There, they discover a human named Allen, who's ended up on their world by accident and needs their help to find a way home.
I was so hoping from some scrubs type stuff at the hospital. Looking forward to more. I can just imagine pony JD and Pony Dr. Cox lol.
"Why did you page me?"
"Well you see, Dr. Star I was just wondering how many miligrams of hahoma I should give this patient."
"Oh my Celestia it is just a regular strength painkiller, you take a hoof full and throw it at the patient. Whatever sticks that's the correct dosage." Lol. Sorry I'm tired.
Give... the brand new, never-before-seen creature... a BLOOD TRANSFUSION? From a species not his own? When you have no idea what makes up his blood, body composition, or even protein structure?
He’s dead. RIP Allen.
Also, not sure why AJ keeps putting her hat over her heart. That’s usually a sign of respect for the dead, which he ain’t - yet.
Phht. It's obviously magical pony blood with polymorphic properties that allow it to scan, identify, adapt to, and replicate any host body's DNA and antigen security response features.
...they should actually be very worried about being invaded by soulless conquering aliens seeking to add their technomagy to their own...
8815871 I love how they take him to a doctor who is only trained in pony physiology and not to a vet who would be better trained and knowledgeable about non-pony physiologies and better equipped to treat associated traumas of non-pony lifeforms. I also love how Fluttershy doesn't mention anything about taking this non-pony lifeform to a vet instead of a pony doctor.
8887788 True. But even though I have only seen through the season 5 opener, I have never heard of monkeys being mentioned in FiM. So although alot of authors use it as an excuse when a human shows up, it's possible they either don't exist or aren't common knowledge. Besides if even Fluttershy didn't know what he was, then just the knowledge that he could speak would make it feel kinda rude to treat him like an animal.
So?. I add this story for my favorite but this is first time read. This story i like. good write, fluid and start interessing. Nice start for You Oc arrive and Meet the Mane six. See you to new chapter
The genuine technical medical jargon is a good touch, but, if you're going to go to all that trouble, especially with a few of those test in checking blood health, then there needs to be some mention of some kind of spell, scan, or test to make sure he's even compatible with the blood they have in storage, otherwise it's a rather glaring oddity to seemingly assume two separate species share blood-types.
Watched.
Some people say there's way too many HiE fics. I can't get enough of them.
Ole dude dragon food
I was already impressed with this story, but that well-used ER jargon sealed it for me. I'm definitely following this story.
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You and me both!
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Glad to hear it!
Been awhile since you've written anything. I'm looking forward to reading this.
That would be sailed, or sails there Jay. I don't have a witty remark for this typo by the way.
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8809775
Provided they aren't poorly written I agree with you guys.
One thing we could use more of is female human in Equestria/Stallion ships.
I was so hoping from some scrubs type stuff at the hospital. Looking forward to more. I can just imagine pony JD and Pony Dr. Cox lol.
"Why did you page me?"
"Well you see, Dr. Star I was just wondering how many miligrams of hahoma I should give this patient."
"Oh my Celestia it is just a regular strength painkiller, you take a hoof full and throw it at the patient. Whatever sticks that's the correct dosage."
Lol. Sorry I'm tired.
Welp, he’s dead, gg doc.
Not bad. Looking forward to seeing more.
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Wouldn't that be for all stories?
Nice start, dude!
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Give... the brand new, never-before-seen creature... a BLOOD TRANSFUSION? From a species not his own? When you have no idea what makes up his blood, body composition, or even protein structure?
He’s dead. RIP Allen.
Also, not sure why AJ keeps putting her hat over her heart. That’s usually a sign of respect for the dead, which he ain’t - yet.
Lets get this show started, so far so good on the first chappie!
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Phht. It's obviously magical pony blood with polymorphic properties that allow it to scan, identify, adapt to, and replicate any host body's DNA and antigen security response features.
...they should actually be very worried about being invaded by soulless conquering aliens seeking to add their technomagy to their own...
8815871
I love how they take him to a doctor who is only trained in pony physiology and not to a vet who would be better trained and knowledgeable about non-pony physiologies and better equipped to treat associated traumas of non-pony lifeforms. I also love how Fluttershy doesn't mention anything about taking this non-pony lifeform to a vet instead of a pony doctor.
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True. But even though I have only seen through the season 5 opener, I have never heard of monkeys being mentioned in FiM. So although alot of authors use it as an excuse when a human shows up, it's possible they either don't exist or aren't common knowledge. Besides if even Fluttershy didn't know what he was, then just the knowledge that he could speak would make it feel kinda rude to treat him like an animal.
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Fluttershy does mention seeing a spider monkey in Celestia's personal garden in the first season finale, so yes, they are canon.
So?. I add this story for my favorite but this is first time read. This story i like. good write, fluid and start interessing.
Nice start for You Oc arrive and Meet the Mane six.
See you to new chapter
The genuine technical medical jargon is a good touch, but, if you're going to go to all that trouble, especially with a few of those test in checking blood health, then there needs to be some mention of some kind of spell, scan, or test to make sure he's even compatible with the blood they have in storage, otherwise it's a rather glaring oddity to seemingly assume two separate species share blood-types.
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which, given that horse blood has a ton more phenotypes then human, means that hes dead
Yes you do - he's unconscious; he won't know if you slip his pants down for a peek - just to confirm his sex.
...Somehow I don't think a human body would accept pony blood...
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These are magic ponies we are talking about here. They can probably use magic to make it so blood they have matches the blood type of the human.
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Real horses, yes. Equestrian ponies biology is probably much different than earth horses.
FREE MA BOY HE AINT DO NOTHIN