• Published 21st Mar 2018
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The Sparkle In His Soul - JaydexTheShadowKnight

Princess Celestia sends Twilight Sparkle and her friends to investiage dragon activity in the Smokey Mountains. There, they discover a human named Allen, who's ended up on their world by accident and needs their help to find a way home.

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Aw that was sweet at the end

More of the mystery has been revealed. I'm glad the rod didn't work. I was expecting him to bing it back to Ponyville or the outskirts of Ponyville first TBQH. Mostly in the hopes that the rod would remember the location it was activated from making it easier for Allen to get back to Equestria if he could. Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Are you going to finish the story


It would be in very poor taste to leave you all hanging.

Last updated 23rd Feb 2020

we will have been hanging for a year in 3 days.

I'd love to see this story continue. It's amazing. 😊

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