" Greater love hath no man than this, that he lay down his life for his friends. "- ainz ooal gown
In this story students have been vanishing without a trace, only thing that is left is some blood and a note that belongs to W. luna wants to try and find out who it is and stop them along with silver lightning and her sister celestia. Can the trio find out who is doing this or will they be the next victims?
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This was supposed to be the first story I did on here but it took a while to finish truly it is short but Silver deserved to have his story told and I hope you all find your special some pony and hold them close and be there for them, be there silver my friends. I hope you enjoy :). Give Celestia a hug if you see her XD.
The ending was sad
but great work
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thank you kindly it was kinda my first try at a murder love story XD
Well, quite an interesting idea. Not one of the most original ones, but Celestia and Luna being students is a rather intriguing breath of fresh air. The proposed mystery also raises some intrigue.
However, the execution would need work. It is really fast-paced, most of the information given can be either conveyed better or fully omitted, and the chapter contains quite a few grammar errors (such as the lack of capitalization of proper nouns). Also, most people on this site won’t even look at a story with chapters below 1k words, so that’s also something to consider. I recommend getting a second pair of eyes to help you look the story over to polish it to perfection
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yeah i will admit this is not one of my best ones
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It’s alright :) Just trying to help you so you know what to avoid in your future stories
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Thank you kindly