• Published 13th Jan 2018
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Clean 'N Smoky - Papa Oats



Everything was just a nightmare, but Clean can't shake the feeling that things aren't exactly OK.

Comments ( 2 )

Damn, I sure do like this story. Im going to reread your stuff. Its after all to good, not too.
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You know after started rereading earlier stories. I honestly like Blublood more then Twilight.

Even further I think he would make a better magic then Twilight. To be honest though I doubt that will happen. I just thought it worth sharing.

Ps. It always struck even for a kids show that unicorn [One can imagine wealthy and well off? Is the one that get the immortality and power?]

Pps. [Kid show all that. And destiny blah blah. But really kind of interesting message for kids shows. Is all Im saying you know? Like what if everyone got power? Or a zebra in zebrica? You know?]

[Like even a kids show. Keeping existing power structure in place are important. More important then change or growth? And of course because destiny you can always say this is how its supposed to be? Sounds rarher insidious for me.]

Sorry the long diatride at the end. I always thought for a kids show that family watchs. It really has some odd messages. [For me...mind.] plus I think its important to be critical of media we enjoy.

Ppps. [Yes I know. I cant shut my typing. But I wanted. It just like with destiny it sort of implies that you also can work and grow? But you just will never reach the same level as say Celestia? [But my rebuttel...is like? How do you grow then if you dont suck at first? Would not make more sense everyone could grow equally?]

Like what is destiny in this world if not a chain to continue the system?

Im done. Cough Cough. :twilightblush:

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