Just letting you know, this:
"While they were working Chrysalis took and small look at the before turning back to"
still glad to see an update.

Great story so far

This is a fun story, got a “like from me” and will be tracking. Moves kind of...fast though. Not a lot of character growth or interactions besides some scant dialogue that seems more like exposition than interactions. Things just seem too...happen. Ya ever think of maybe slowing down and focusing more on character growth and interactions? Situations like...”chrysalis is waiting with ED-E...oh yeah ED-E was repaired...moving on now no questions asked”. Just seems like the story is missing a lot, like it’s just a storyboard or a rough idea OF a story. Still fun though, earned a like from me, will be reading and looking foreword to the next chapter.

Is the story dead?

Don't give up on the story

Update ???? M

Update when?