• Member Since 25th Nov, 2017
  • offline last seen April 14th

Tailspin333


T

Harry as been living in the US for the past five years after the war due to his Master of Death status along with something else he had learned from his friends. During those five years a rift to Equestria appeared in the town he lives in. Now it has become a small city with humans and ponies coming and going. He has picked up signs of wizards in the city and decided to go to Equestria to keep them off his tail. He never thought he would run into this amount of trouble.

(Rating may change to M later on.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 26 )

Nice, so Harry going to Equestria through a portal that opened from Equestria's side instead of Earth's side, that's a lot better for how he got there then in most other Harry Potter/ MLP-FIM crossover fanfics.

So now Harry's living his life in Ponyville, so it's set sometime after Luna is brought back, but how much further in the time line is Harry now in the MLP-FIM world, is it before Discord gets out, or maybe before the Wedding but after Discord or what?

OMNI:I like it it has much potential.
MIND:You sometimes refer to Harry as Danny it is recommended that you fix it.
OMNI:It's still good though.

OMNI:I love this story please don't abandon it.
TIME:He says on the day of update.
OMNI:SHUT UP!!!

Sorry for the down vote but you are having problems with plot (storyline), flow, and the fact that you can't keep the name of the main character straight.

"I see, thanks for the information." He thanks her. He leaves the building and follows the directions he was given. He reaches the trains station and gets on the train after buying a ticket being lucky he came as it was arriving. The train left a few minutes later after he got on and most of the ride was spent just staring out and enjoying the beauty of the land. But when the train approached the village he'd chosen as his new home, Danny finally got his first glimpse of what to expect when the the train followed a bend in the tracks; the city of Canterlot slowly disappearing from sight and Ponyville taking its place.

Danny finally got his first glimpse......
Who is Danny?

Several more minutes passed as Harry watched in silence as the train slowly came to a stop beside the platform; a steam whistle calling out the second the train had come to a full stop and snapping Danny out of his dream-like wonder.

snapping Danny out of his dream-like wonder.
Again, who is Danny? I thought this was Harry Potter fanfic.

I wonder what Chrysalis will think of Harry when she meets him, his magical levels would get her attention I bet.

OMNI:HUZZAH!!! Update! And a good one as well.

Please do yourself a favor and find an editor. I love Harry Potter, and I feel like this story could have some potential, but any interest I have in this story currently is absolutely destroyed by the inconsistencies and improper English. Please fix this.

My advice, have them find out during the battle in the second half of the wedding of the show.

I'm loving this story so far! Update pls? :fluttercry:

Liking the story so far.
Tho I am confused as to why Harry doesn't tell then about the wizarding society. It would get him their favour for the warning and maybe exchanged magical knowledge and he wouldn't have to hide his abilities.
The statute of secrecy only applies to telling about magic to non magical, which the equestrians are definitely not.

So, he buys a house and then he pays rent?

finally I've been waiting for an update
Good chapter

Great new Chapter!
So Harry has told them now, Interesting!
It will be funny wehn wizzards and witches from the UK will try to Enter Equestria....

Thanks for the new chapter, I've almost given up hope you will come back. As for couples, I'd see Harry x Luna pairings - that's all I ask for :twilightsmile:

He told them of how his sixth year went starting with the summer, How he was picked up by members of the order and the attack as they made there was to safely with losses including Hedwig, whose death made Fluttershy cry softly for harry having to lose her like that and then be forced to removed the sidecar holding her body.

That happened before what would have been his seventh year not before his sixth.

55 bits for a house, and 20 for a cherry?

Fluttershy quickly moved to him and hugged him. They rest of them joined in even Princess Luna for she now understood what he meant when he said he was hunted by nightmares when he was young. The mane six and Luna stay with him as he did the ritual the muggle way. A couple of hours later they left with Luna stopping at the door for a minute. "If you ever want to talk about something we are willing to listen to you." Luna told him.

I think the word is "Haunted", not hunted ..

Their houses must be cheap

can't wait for more

Okay replace the Danny with Harry, so I don't think you used parts of a Danny Phantom fic into this. Other than that, this fic is interesting.

Hi I am newly logged on FimFiction but I had read the story Harry Potter: Equestria several times.
I wonder why this story was not updated, it is very interesting and would wish to read more. Why it has not been updated for this long, it is a very good read. When would it be possible for it to be updated.
It will be very interesting to read more and see the relationship between Luna and Harry as well as Harry and the others. I could give some ideas to help you in this story, if you would be interested.

Login or register to comment