In my Sunburst obsession era. I'm Starlight Uplifting (they/them) and I hope I can write more for y'all to enjoy!
Class presentations, school projects, even the class play. My best friend was always struggling to get his words out. Now. Now it's time to tell this class, this teacher. The facts that my poor friend wanted to tell. But didn't have the strength to say.
He needs me. Now and always.
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A bit fast paced. I feel as if more details could've been added. But overall, it was good. I enjoyed reading it. Will be sure to read the side-stories and sequels when they come out.
8490488
It wasn't supposed to be a novel. None of my stories are supposed to be like that. And a fast paced story is normal for me. Pacing was not a strong suit and I know it well. Thanks for giving it a read.
Teacher must be fired......
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
8490683
But, yes, I understand. Pacing isn't that easy. I'm not much of a writer, and especially not a good one. So I can't really offer any good advice for that. You can try to add more details around the place. Might help a bit. 
Novels are 40k+ words, from what I remember, so I doubt it could've been one.
And, you're welcome. I'm glad to have read it, because I enjoyed it.
8490867
I see you missed the point. This was the first of the future, more in depth dramatic situations. If you expected overwhelming debating with oneself and horrible conflict, you haven't figured out what the message is.
8490708
That's why there will be a sequel, a longer more fleshed out sequel.
8490775
I'll figure it all out with time as a guide. Advice isn't the problem it's motivations. I don't have the motivation to boost the story's length.
Sometimes one doesn't need an epic adventure to tell an important story; a short slice of life is all it takes.
Just be aware that you have slipped from past to present tense in the middle of the first chapter.
This one started a little abruptly, but as it progressed, the pacing and flow became far more even and enjoyable
Overall, it was an intriguing read, a show of true friendship and a good demonstration of the overlooked problems. Sadly, the "counselor" that used to be in my school could easily top Ms. Cardinal. I swore that if I ever had some issue, I'd talk to anyone but her... But I'm getting of track here. You did really nice in presenting a possible way to mask the anxiety, hopefully it will help someone reading the story
Oh, by the way, would you be willing to have a talk about the grammar rules of direct speech?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to what you can come up with for the other ponies! Tracking and upvoted
8644517
I've been practicing these things since I took my break from this website. So no, I don't wish to partake in a conversation about grammatical rules. Glad you liked it though, I don't really know where to go from here.
8644852
Alright, you are welcome
With what you want to go where, if I may ask? The sequels?
8644857
Precisely. Sequels are hard to work with. I don't know if you've tried writing a sequel, but I personally can't come up with new conflicts.
8644893
I see. I haven't had the pleasure to try it out yet, but I think I know what you mean. Maybe the strain of keeping the same style and spirit of the previous story is also a factor?
8644915
Yeah.