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Lighting Ace


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Have you ever wonder, what are the portals that connect with Equestria are made off? What mysteries hold such an inusual means of transportation? And more important, what or who keep the road clean and ensure that all and every adventure starts properly and without a hitch?

Well what if I told that, all of that can be thanks to a certain structure safely build inside say portals and who important is crucial for billions of stories continue or even start? This is the story that tell the tale of such magical place one who owner constantly change, and to the misfortune of certain elements of harmony, a place that they will soon discover.

There a mysteries of the unknown that are better left unanswered, but perhaps this story will help show some light into those questions, or at the very least give you a small peek into the nature of the legendary vortex that connect other worlds.


I make this short one shot in hopes of helping writers on the page, if you have a mental block or don't know how to start your story, you are free to used this one as reference. I only ask to please send me a PM informing me of your wish to used it and I will try to help you build a nice base.

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Comments ( 7 )

(looks at title) Do Nobodies appear?

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Je if they were ponies first and got lost in the multiverse, its very possible that they have or will appear

You need an editor.
Badly.

I would be more than happy to proofread/edit this story.

Just hit me up.

8497183
I would love that, thanks I will do just that

A very nice meta story, thumbs up. But you seriously need to find an editor and/or practice English quite a bit more. What is your native language, by the way?

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Spanish and don't worry I already found an editor who is actually working on it, I would probably upload the clean version, soon. Not sure its complete but I'm sure its better than now.

Sorry for the grammar errors

"You can't have it" Beacon whisper in Rarity ear making her to immediately jump from the scare and land on her flank "Beacon! You almost gave me a heart attack!" She glares at him while holding her chest. The others girls just look in amazement for how quick he just appear next to Rarity. "I apologies miss Rarity" He gives her a small vow and then help her stand up by offering his hand, which she takes" Being here for so long tends to bored anyone, eventually you need to find ways to distract you" He say with a smile "And I'm also mean it miss, I'm sorry but you really can't take anything from here, that gem for example" He point to the collar

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"Ah…mister Beacon, I'm sorry for asking but where are you talking us?" Fluttershy ask

taking

"Tailycure?" Rarity ask confused at that and Beacon only smile "Would you like to know how many Rarity there are or have become dragons?" He ask with a smirk. Rarity just look at him with a mild surprise before they resume their tour.

Without saying another word Beacon start the elevator and soon they return to the first floor where they continue their trip throw out the hallways.

through

“The dark corner" Beacon sigh and look down "The only place that remains a mystery to me and all the INN keeper before me" He looks up and notices it fade just as soon as it appear "The moving hallway that never stays in one floor for too long, not even I know what lays inside there, but according to a warning my predecesor left me, that corner has being know for stripping this place from their INN keeper, it apparently is the most sinister and most dangerous place that exist in all know and unknown universe ” He then looks back at the main six “I don't think its necessary for me to say but none of you should ever go near it. Under any circumstance” He tells and the place is left in complete silence before he turns around. Guide them into a double set of doors with a frame of Twilight's old treehouse carve on it. “Ah and here we are our final destination. The library”

I make this imagining how could you describe the world of fim fic and purposely leave the ending to the readers to decided. I hope that you enjoy the story, and if you wish me to continue let me know in the comments.

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