Fluttershy's life takes a turn for the worst when she makes the horrific discovery that she is being followed by the silhouette of a creepy and mysterious black figure. No matter where she goes, it's always right there staring directly at her. There's no escaping it. It's just constantly standing there... watching her... following her. What is it? Why is it following her? What does it want? Why is she the only pony who can see it? And who is this new pony that's just moved to Ponyville?
Then it strikes! What can Fluttershy do when this thing appears to want her dead? Being invisible to everypony except her, Fluttershy is almost completely alone. With little to no help available and everything to lose, Fluttershy has to face her darkest fears to discover its secrets, and learn to defend herself from this evil and threatening entity. Otherwise, she hasn't got very long to live. Her time is running out. Any moment could be her last...
Note: The story is rated Teen for dark supernatural themes that may frighten young children.
Huge Thanks To My Amazing Proofreader & Editor: Daring Berry
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Thanks. Glad to hear you're enjoying it so far. I'm quite proud of it myself, and I see this story as an improvement from 'Trapped!' I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to reading more. My editor is quite busy so the second chapter won't be up for a while, but I am very excited to publish the rest of the story as the editing continues. I'll probably continue to update progress for it and other Fimfictions through blogs.
Hello!
I have reviewed your story. I'm interested to seeing where you will take it, and I am sorry that I don't have much insight to share with you about it at this time. Hopefully, though, this will still be somewhat helpful to you.
As always, thank you for your time, effort, and hard work that was put into the creation of this narrative.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=9#comment/6344205
Shouldn't there be an OC tag, for the thing following Fluttershy?
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That's actually a really good point. I should probably rectify that. I think Crystal is another reason to add an OC tag.