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Seems the politic issue is cleared (or at least out of the way for now), are we going to do some engineering for real now?
It was obvious the dar council dude was the one starting the war, since soft was expelled, now his motives we will see.
Did this pass through an editor? I'm noticing a number of mistakes in this chapter.
Edit: Hmm, I take it back. There's only three I noticed on the second pass.
summoner > summon
samel > same
spare > spear
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No.
No chapter has seen an editor, except readers, like you.
This is part of how I produce a chapter every day on most days.
First thing that popped into. my head:
So only one city qualifies to have a backup spell. I doubt the rebellion will be happy with that. The devil truly is in the details.
Even in making a concession to the rebellion, it looks like the council will still finagle with things by making it so only one city gets a back-up spell. Politicians Buuuut I guess Ian's journey meant that some headway has been made.
I would guess that agents of the as-of-yet unknown third party both attacked from among the representative of both sides at once, then immediately yelled about how the other side was attacking. Best way to do it, really.
One MILLION? Wow, uh, that's actually crazy large for a city with no sanitation. Rome at its height was one third of a million. Paris in 1500 was around 200k. Only Beijing was that large until, like, 1800.
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Yeah its quite a stretch, but perhaps the ponies breed faster or just are slightly cleaner than humans were, who knows.
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