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Fort Impression


Pinkie Pie is my waifu, and she will ever four ever be my waifu... not yours.

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Going through the hardships of his world, Soto Konoha has lost all interest in moving on through life and the people in it. One unusually quiet night, he gets an e-mail from an unknown sender that says could either change his life or leave him left for dead. Replying to the e-mail's wishes, Soto soon finds himself in a situation he cannot leave until 7 nights pass. In the mean time, he is stuck having to deal with the trouble he has done his best to avoid in the world he came from. Will he stay the same as he was before he entered their world, or will they change his heart before it's too black?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

of what i've read....pretty good. i didn't see many grammatical errors or anything along those lines. Very intrested to see how this story turns out.:pinkiecrazy:

P.S. this message will self-destruct when you finish reading it.:eeyup:

937440 Lol, thanks.:pinkiehappy: I will assure you that the chapters here on out will be a bit more interesting because this is just the warm up before everything starts happening.:pinkiecrazy:

937742 sweet. you should put in in the group so all the others could read it.:pinkiecrazy:

937747 I will delete this later, but how do I do that?:twilightblush:

you dont have too. i nor daylight knew how to do that about 2 weeks ago soo.
DIRECTIONS!!!
when you click the story and it shows the chapters you will see 2 buttons. "Stats" and "Add to group". Just click add to group and click which group and boom!:pinkiegasp:
it'll be there:rainbowlaugh:
that helpful?:unsuresweetie:

937779 Okie dokie lokie thanks a bunch :pinkiehappy:
Edit: It won't let me because it isn't published yet. It is still pending for approval.

Author's Extra Note: Do not call that number, I have no idea where it will send you. I just put a random number on there for the story. If you call it, I can no longer be held responsible for what happens during or after the call has been made.:twilightsmile:

1009619 Thanks :ajsmug: Might take awhile for chapter 3, it's pretty long, but I will get it done.

1009963 Please don't post something like this in my comments again.:ajbemused:

Wow. Your right, we are gettin' into some deep ish ma friend. Good job. Take 4 mustaches for the first and second chapter:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I am taking you in to Princess Celestia to verify that you are not a treat, like I said early, and I already answered that question.

Yummy.... I love the taste of Soto in the morning. :twilightsmile:

1011988 whoops:twilightblush: heh heh heh, Yeah I will fix that now. (Stupid:facehoof:)

1012014 We all have our derp moments man. :twilightsmile:

1012020 Yeah, Soto isn't really all that tasty, he is very bitter and sour. Not even the dogs would eat him (and dogs eat everything [except a certain Haitiian cuisine]). :pinkiesick:

Can’t this day get any worse? He will soon find out...as soon as he meets Pinkie.:pinkiecrazy:

Looking good, Soto! I like where it's going, looks like fun!

1043026 Fun, yes. Funny, of course. Sad, why wouldn't there be.:rainbowlaugh: Thanks a lot. I will get my next chapter up asap, now that I am back from vacation.:rainbowdetermined2:

Is that a red and black alicorn OC I see? How original.

1069555 Actually he's pink and blue.:rainbowhuh:

EDIT: Is that someone judging the story before giving it a read I see? How original. :ajsmug: Just be sure to give it a skim, and then keep the thumbs down. Thanks for skimming it. :pinkiehappy:

1069580 You don't have a sense of sarcasm or humor, do you?:ajbemused: You are really boring to talk to if you can't have fun with your conversations.:trixieshiftright: (I even used a Trixie emoto for you, and I promised myself never to use it.)

1069594 I did skim it, it's the same as every other HiE story. "MY LIFE SUCKS! Now I'm in Equestria and everything's happy. The End,"

1069634 No wonder, you skimmed HiM and not this story. Now that makes sense on why you are so judgmental about this.:derpyderp2:

EDIT: Need I also mention, that 'everything' in this story is a person, so it should be 'everyone's happy'. Just saying. If you want to criticize, do it with proper grammar and word usage. :fluttercry:

I <3 your super dep fanficss!!! You shod rite mor 2 show how emotisn u hav.

1070080 Thanks, I plan to get my next chapter up in a week, and I am going to write another fan fic fiction soon. So, just stay tuned, and I won't disappoint you. I still have a lot I have to get out.:ajbemused: Otherwise, there will be a bunch of mood changers because the main character is sort of weird. He can be a jerk at times (well most of the time), but other times, he can be pretty cool, sad, random, angry, etc. He is something.

You will just have to read the story because I made sure they weren't predictable, but general concept. As you can see in the comments, there is one that gave a general concept, but kind of failed.:fluttershysad: Of course the general concept is almost always the same for every story, but I made sure the the detailed concept was a bit random and unreadable. You can have fun having your ideas on what they plan on doing, and figuring out what the anonymous messenger wants from him. It is a pretty easy theme, so it shouldn't be that hard. Thanks for liking the story, and I hope you like what I have in store.:ajsmug:

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha

Fourth chapter is up and running!:pinkiehappy:
Also, the unicorn mentioned in this story, I will put the picture up on my next blog.:raritywink: In the mean time, enjoy the read, and I will let you guys know when the next chapter will be coming.:ajsmug:

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha

rely gud but i am sugest u do add this 2 group train wreck explorers they maek betr

1497326 I am an Administrator of the TWE group. I know my flaws and everything in this story that needs improvement, but I do thank you for the advice.

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