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Just a normal guy who got hooked on the new My Little Pony show.


The sequel to An American Dude in Equestria

Years after returning to Earth, the human finds himself once again brought to the ponies' world. This time, however, his friends don't recognize him and their adventures are dictated and observed by Discord himself. Deception, pain, absurdity, and tension abound.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 264 )


He is a bloody pony!
No faiur!
Criken will eat you laek cabbaeuge!
Mah waifu!!!€¿¡¤¢₩¥£$§₩®©°:facehoof:

Wooh, sequel! Can't wait to see where this goes, I'll take a gander and say that hilarity ensues. And awesomeness, loads of that in the mix as well.

Wooh, sequel! Can't wait to see where this goes, I'll take a gander and say that hilarity ensues. And awesomeness, loads of that in the mix as well.

"Hell, life on Earth had never been better—at least that's what all the “experts” claimed. The world's economies had mostly recovered, violent crime rates were at an all-time low, and diplomats had somehow actually succeeded in reducing the tensions in the Middle East. New medical advances had developed more effective treatments for cancer and diabetes, and AIDS was quickly being eradicated thanks to a special DNA-altering vaccine. Even the tree-hugging environmentalists were happy, since new energy-saving measures and pollution regulations had been signed into law in the past few years. Despite being dissatisfied with my life, I should have been able to spare a little happiness for how everyone else's lives had improved from all that."

Where is this Earth and how do I get to it?

Aw, do we really have to wait a whole week for more? I wanna see more! (Plus next week I'm going to be busy with thanksgiving and playing Saints Row: The Third :rainbowwild: )


When I got an email that said some "Shadowmane" had uploaded a new story I went ":rainbowhuh: who was that again?"
Then I realized and went ":pinkiehappy: Hell yeah!"
Can't wait to see what happens!
Also, is it just me, or was there a sort of Matrix reference with the red pill he ate before CMC brought him back?

YES! YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESFUCK! I promised myself that I'd update my story before you updated yours. Oh well. It was still awesome. :twilightblush:

whats stoping Jesse from enjoying his time in "his mind"? he knows its not "real" and that thers probly no way to be sure if he will wake up from whatever type of "dream" he is having enytime soon, so why resist? will he ever realize that he cant force himself out of "his mind" and just go with the flow of his "hallucination"?


MY MONEY. TAKE ALL OF IT :pinkiecrazy:

(put joyis expression here)


this is about 20% mor awesome than the first story :rainbowkiss:

I just finnished reading the first story today. And then the second shows up xD

Wait, I just remembered your blog post that I read a few days ago and it said that you have already done quite a few chapters that are ready for release RIGHT NOW, but you're waiting a week. Damn you and your effective methods of maintaining interest in your story. Also, I tried imagining Discord's breath. OH GOD WHY.

God why!!!!!! Why am I now intrested in this!!!!

Damn it!!!!

hm. I hope the mane 6 arent noticably older, at least not so much that it becomes an issue. Still, SYCHED for more, i like how dark this one it so far:heart:


I absolutely love that you're writing a sequel to the previous story. The one thing that is sticking out like a sore thumb to me is the already apparent evidence that Jesse is having another psychotic episode (i.e: him vomiting the medicine to PREVENT those episodes). Nonetheless, I will continue to read on because I loved the prequel to this, your writing style, and the chance to see which of the many possible roads this story can take. I eagerly await you quick response.
Your faithful student,

Twilight Sparkle:twilightsmile:

Who touched mai gun?!
Engineer is spy!

YES! epicness so far. man i am just waiting for this to happen
twilight: hey jesse whats up?
jesse: not much (OH SHIT[dropped the ball on that one])

let's do this shiiiiiiiiiii:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


Oh my god, that is so going to happen when they secretly figure out Cog is actually Jesse.

Yay I like this new story

Was totally expected RD to ask, "ARE YOU A SPY?"

Nice chapter, my only criticism is this:

More more more more! :D

We, the people, want MORE!

This is truly an awesome story!

36101 if that happens i will piss myself laughing

And here I thought that the Flame of the Big Apple was applejack's Element of Harmony. :applejackunsure:

Oh wow it took me forever to figure out "the spire of the light that never warms" I think I know it.:pinkiehappy: I could be wrong though

Good stuff. Two thumbs up. :)

or rather update soon or I will go Flutterbitch on your white ass.:flutterrage::flutterrage:

Hey, look, comments! Sorry I haven't been replying to any of them yet, but now I shall!

To all the comments that say Yay!/Cool/Give Moar! (which is most of them):
More is coming, be patient. Unfortunately, I'm writing this thing near the end of the school semester and I'm a bit behind in some of my classes, so one chapter a week is as much as I can manage. On a related note, I'm gonna have to learn the basics of two new programming languages for my computer science class (Lua and Python), and would appreciate a private message from anyone who would be willing to share any tips for getting started.

Actually, modafinil is used to prevent drowsiness and boost concentration. It's not an anti-psychotic drug, and in fact is used to treat narcolepsy, though some use it simply to stay awake and alert for days on end. But yes, it does seem that way, doesn't it? :pinkiecrazy:

I like to think that I'm better at keeping an act up than that. I'm really not, but I like to think so anyway.

I'd like to encourage everyone to use their heads and try to figure out the clues on their own (and the rest when they pop up), but please avoid posting spoilers. There's nothing worse than finding a puzzle that you really want to solve and having someone accidentally give you the solution just as you start to figure it all out.
(Okay, yes, the Holocaust was far worse than that is. Somebody will bring that up, and God kills a kitten every time someone points it out. Think of the kittens :fluttershysad: )

Yeah, school can really eat up a lot of your time, and I know what it's like to be behind in classes.
Anyway, great story, and I'm really looking forward to MORE!

37721 that is why I did not post what I thought the answer was. I posted it mostly as teaser to see if anybody would respond and ask what it was:trollestia:

36101 Twilight: Hey Jesse!
Jesse: Hi Twi! Wait a... Fffffffuck

Twilight is learning well from Trollestia. :trollestia:

Is the entire Earth-to-Equestria-to-Earth-to-Equestria similar to 'Life on Mars' or 'Ashes to Ashes'?:unsuresweetie:

AWW BUCK YEAH!!!!BRING ON THE AWESOMENESS OF THE SEQUEL!!!:yay::pinkiehappy::yay::pinkiehappy::yay:

I love the shout out to "through the eyes of another pony" with the unlimited cig thing.:rainbowlaugh:

Something small and round
(Inserting my own joke)
Something small and round with leather straps on the side.

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