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Isolation
Meh, My Chemical Romance, Atheist, Sketching, Friends, Fluttershy 'Tis all.
Isolation
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Why? Why? WHY?!? Not well written, I don't know if this will remotely even look good.
It started off slightly weak but it got better! I find it kind of cruel that Fluttershy was expecting a he but was intentionally set up with a she. There are some parts that lack description but you've set up an interesting premise!
I'm curious to know what happens next.
“Fluttershy yelped hysterically as Pinkie Pie dragged her out of the boutique.
Other than that slight mistake it was a very good read with a hilarious premise.
922620>>923019 Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this and masterjedi, I'm not sure if you're genuine or feeling sorry for me
922376>>922256 I'm sorry it didn't work out and I'll try better next chapter
925225
I was completely sincere with my comment;if I had thought that your story was bad I wouldn't have said anything.
definetly worth looking at later. could be interesting, though i have to say i don't particularly like the fact that Derpy was drugged...
and i felt the random comment by apple jack about going all the way was quite unnecessary.
more elaboration as to why this is happening to Derpy would also be nice
925543oh all right sorry for that.
really curious to see where this goes.
do you really think that derpy would resort to physical violence?
but she is a Fandom character so do what you will with her i suppose