Lyra Heartstrings has always believed that there is more to the world than meets the eyes. However, when she begins to lose her grip on reality, or rather when reality begins to lose it's grip on her, Lyra discovers that the truth is more than anypony could possibly imagine.
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This feels like a Matrix crossover. I'll need to keep an eye on this one. Great work.
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Thanks! The title is a Matrix quote, yes, but it's certainly not a full crossover, so don't expect to see a ponified Morpheus.
Whoa...
This definitely looks interesting. *tracking*
Tried to proofread, but if I made any glaring errors feel free to point em out. I'm no good at proofreading...
...Holy mindfuck.
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You think that's a mindfuck? It get's worse. Ooohh man it get's worse. I'm having too fun writing this next chapter...
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...Oh dear.
Um... why the sudden switch to first person perspective??
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It was supposed to parallel the prologue. I really wasn't sure if I wanted to make that risk or not but I ending up going with it. Was it too jarring?
959452 It did take me a few seconds to figure out what had just happened...
I suppose it wouldn't hurt to add some sort of transition or something.
Um....
Moar mindfuck!
It feels like the Matrix all of a sudden.