Fatblack
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Please get an editor/proofreader. I had a very hard time reading this.
As Dooby stated, get a proof reader yes. I'd also recommend using an editing program like word or google docs cause you're also making mistakes that a simple spellcheck would solve.
I like this story so far but I noticed you used similar sounding words in the wrong places. Is English your first langue? I could help proofread chapters and polish spelling and grammar.
Cant wait for more :)
And then they all became huge fatties. The end. Hehehe
planning on continuing soon?
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Hoping to soon haven't had time to do so