Four words and they are all true. SBPS follows the girls of Canterlot High after the events of Legend of Everfree, as they deal with graduation, maturation, and a parasite that just wants to cuddle their gray matter.
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Ask X Rainbow: when are you going to tell Rarity that she is going to share you with your dog?
8549105 Rarity? Rainbow has already turned down Rarity's advances.
I know people have tried asking the parasite, and got a fail before, but if I could ask it anything, I would ask it who it considers Rainbow's mate to be ...
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And yet the parasite still consider her a good influence... That mean they will not play more S&M?
I know it would be a repeat/rehashing, or that we are already in this scenario so far right now, but I'd really enjoy reading an aside about Rarity's beginning experiences with the parasite.
My favorite parts were the beginning where the parasite and Dash were having an awkward arousal balance at home and school (by awkward I just mean making her horny all the time around others and interrupting her daily routine, specifically her math class and first post-parasitic gaze at Flash).
I'd love to see Rarity squirm. Heck, I'd love to see them all squirm if I could.
I just figured I'd give my input on what I enjoyed/would enjoy in this story. Not trying to change course or anything, but I thought it couldn't hurt to let you know
Keep up the good work, and loving the updates as usual!
8549368 Well, the parasite IS the star of the story, so I can promise that you will be seeing a more of its effects going forward.
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I wonder if the parasite's offsprings will be more inclined as the thing itself, meaning overcharging the fetishes the victim already has, or if it'll infect others with Rainbow's fetish set. Gut instinct says it's the former.
8549105 And Rainbow is going to ask Fluttershy for advice.
Ask Fluttershy: What would you advise if someone come asking you about their intimate relationship with their pets?
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I think Fluttershy will be too busy having a gang bang with Harry the bear and the other animals
Spicy: "Trust and consent are of the utmost importance etc etc..."
Rainbow:" But you tricked me into wearing these cuffs, and then wouldn't take them off when I asked, you hypocritical douchebag. "
Spicy:"Lel"
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That was payback for lying to him. And at the time they weren't exactly in a relationship.
Hmmm, so he gave her a plug without the other end? Who's really going to be the underling then?
To Luna: how go the preparations?
Keep going! ;)
Does the situation with the parasite become at least a little consensual? More informed? The hardest stuff in this genre is wearing me out.
8552975 Does the parasite become consensual? Huh?
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I mean, does Rainbow Dash at any point recognize that she has a parasite? Because she seems pretty chill from a quick look at the latest chapters.
8553220 It's a fairly big spoiler, but yes, she will definitely realize what is in her.
Another day, another dozen chapters being devoured!
Nitpicks!
"but when she relaxed her muscles it did its job. " Delete
"and while the water continued to scour her tail-hole clean," Unless she is ponied up already...