Four words and they are all true. SBPS follows the girls of Canterlot High after the events of Legend of Everfree, as they deal with graduation, maturation, and a parasite that just wants to cuddle their gray matter.
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Careful Rarity, your freudian slip is showing.
So they're embedded in the towels now. Wonder where to next?
To Pinkie: when's the next party?
Keep going! ;)
Ask X Rarity: think any of the Rainbooms apart of Dash could like girls?
To Fluttershy: If your friend tell you that she like girls, would you interest?
Nitpicks, nothing but loads and loads of nitpicks for this chapter!
" and finished with a foot massage that she noticed had Rarity actually squirming" Feels like a word or something else are missing here.
"But why don't we have a proper fashion day tomorrow?"" Missing dippy dot of "ness
"A rush of emotions poured through Lavender Lace," You have a line break mistake here. Gotta love Fimfic and its coding.
9249763 The linebreak was my word processor messing up. It mangled basically the whole chapter and I had to redo all the paragraph breaks.