Four words and they are all true. SBPS follows the girls of Canterlot High after the events of Legend of Everfree, as they deal with graduation, maturation, and a parasite that just wants to cuddle their gray matter.
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>wolf girl pajamas
Spicy.
Ooh, Fluttershy! Hmmm, if Rainbow doesn't spill enough beans maybe she'll pick up other tells and decide to investigate? If she speaks with Thunderbolt will it worry her more, or be happy for his attachment? At least she could help the poor thing learn the rules
that will totally get broken.To Sonata: huh, wasn't Rarity supposed to pick you up today?
Keep going! ;)
8590376 Bridget would have nothing less.
8590396 That will be out next week!
Probably a good thing we won't see grumpy Angel Bunny in this story. The half-wolf looks more intimidating and a better of a guardian in the human world.
Ask Fluttershy: What is it you love to hunt? Do you have a feeling to 'hunt' any of your friends?
8590728 There is only so much a grumpy bunny can do when there is a half-wolf well over 10 times his size who just doesn't take his shit.
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I agree with you on this. By the way, please don't let Zephyr get infected in this story, otherwise the story's sexyness level will drop to negative zone with no hope of repairing. Please spare us on this.
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Eh, don't underestimate Angel. He's crafty. And the Equestrian version at least can use objects. Bridget is big, but even she wouldn't want a frying pan between the eyes. Again, that would be in Equestria, though. Human Fluttershy doesn't seem to have the same connection to any bunny.
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Disagree! I would love to see Zephyr get more involved. Preferably in a way that's not all hammering in how we're supposed to dislike him. Yeah, he's weird and shiftless, but Fluttershy and him are still supposed to love each other, yet most authors just ignore that part. It's a shame.
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I felt I had to portray Zephyr in this way. The recent short shows him in much the same light as he was pre-reform, and so that was the targeted version. More will happen with Zeph, but being underage it won't be what you think (dread?). Ultimately, he needs to find his thing and learn to stick with it.
As for Angel, he is just a bunny at this point. He might be fixated on Fluttershy a little, but there is something big with a lot of teeth between him and his prize.
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You have every reason to portray him as he was shown in the shorts. He's awkward, weird, has no sense of personal space and acts like he's the smoothest thing since vanilla smoothies. But there's more there.
You are also right that his human version is in a different spot than his pony one. They're both still in school, so the need to find your way is much less oppressive. On the other hand, consider how much more inadequate he must feel compared to Equestria if he knows what his sister is capable of. Ponyshy saved the world several times. Humanshy also saved the world, but in a world where almost nobody has magic at all making her even more extra-special.
To be frank, my point was more directed at authors who only use him as a cheap Hate Sink, a trope I despise deeply. Even some writers I have great respect for just use him to be a hateable creep, get beaten up, rinse, repeat.
8591328 I don't plan to ever use him as a "main focus character," but there will be more of Zeph seen, and he might not be quite as repulsive.
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Also... is he still underage? I have no idea how old Zephyr is. He seems older than the Crusaders. Equestria Girls ages are confusing. Snips and Snail hang out with Trixie and Big Mac, Zephyr looks like he should be older than Fluttershy, Babs actually is as old as Applejack according to the comics...
8591335 Zephyr is a junior at school, a year behind Fluttershy and co. This puts him firmly in underage territory. Big Mac is a classmates of his.
The CMC are a mite-bit further down the ladder, and are matched in class with Snips as freshmen (Snips was meant to be a sophomore, but was kept back).
Snails managed to study a little harder than Snips, and moved on to being a sophomore.
Like the humane7, Trixie is a senior, as are her two close friends (as stated, Twilight was pushed ahead, she should be a junior).
I think this story all comes down to Twilight (EqG), you know, with the parasite and everything.
8595608 SCIENCE?!
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With that breakdown I take it you're marking Twilight as off limits here?
8603179 Until she is of age, yes. There is going to be things that happen leading up to that, and because of it. Don't fear, you will eventually see a sexy SciTwi.
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Just infected him magic or maybe a sex parasite that will make him more bold.