A young human finds himself in Equestria, lost, not in body, but in purpose as he attempts to belong in the alien world. A mare, devoid of a destiny, seeks to end it all. Can these two stray souls find meanining in each other? Can they find more?
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your doing strange things to my feels man. ....continue
Its getting cutter as I read a long.
Welp, now I'm invested. If you drop this story I'll have to kill myself. We will see them become a couple and her get a drawing related cutie mark.
This is really clunky. Maybe rewrite it?
God, this is so fucking adorable. I need more of this in my life. #IshipIt
I love it MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!
Aww, little Floor conflated the saying, 'It's a date' with an actual date!
Oh, and I really want to know what kinky shit she is into if she thinks she is worthy to be on a watchlist.
wow, you actually made me enjoy an anon fic other than diaries of a madman.
Here's hoping that Gram Gram likes Anon as much as Floor...
I need more please it is so good
Got a Greater Than sign still present. Might wanna nix that before mods get the impression that this is a green text.
That last line, she doesn't want to die because it would mean she couldn't see anon
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I'm not sure but the phrase "it's a date." Is the origin of the term "out on a date." Most people don't use the term date when dealing with the opposite gender unless they intend to be flirty and ambiguous. Anon is making the same assumption that Floor is not romantically intrestrested in him, and is being playfully flirty. I know people who do this and it causes problems when they don't intend anything romantic. But Anon seems to be opening up to a deeper sort of relationship, this might make things weird since he will probably back off on the flirtystuff. Well have to see how this develops.
You have done a spectacular job at making Floor absolutely adorable! Thank you for that, I look forward to seeing more!
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Cutter? did you mean cuter?
The shipping is so real (for me), that this multi petabyte organic structure can hardly hold the enthusiasm toward the potential inter-species relations.
With his writing and her drawing they could team up to make some decent comics.
And just like that I'm hocked.
Floor is a precious treasure that needs to be taken care of.
Keep doing your best anon-kun.
This is my kind of story, Kind of Brony. good stuff, putting it in my top ten for sure, as soon as I think of the other 6
Fluff intensifies
Congrats. You've reduced me to someone who every half-hour to an hour, checks this page for an update. I can't get enough. Great work! :)
I wonder, is this going to end with them getting together? Or will it end like any other green text? Wait and see I guess.
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I might have one more chapter in me for this weekend, then I'll probably be burnt out for a bit. Now I have even more stories to work on.
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What's the other three you've got so far?
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Shhh... Don't spoil it.
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Mmm, Inter-species. Brown Chicken Brown Cow
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... It is your life, isn't it? I'd send you a hug, but I think I have a pretty good idea where your hands have been.
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Oh no, you've been hocked. Who were you hocked to? That bastard, when will people learn that slavery is wrong!?
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Admittedly, there's room there for a manipulative dynamic; plenty of people have stayed in bad relationships because they felt obligated out of fear of what the other person would do if they left.
"If you leave me, I'll kill myself!!!" screams the crazy girl/boyfriend. Kinda like 8386419 here... (I won't let you die, bud)
Luckily, Floor is too pure for such things, and hopefully will find more reasons to live soon besides just Anon.
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Never read that one, and at this point it's too long for me to even consider starting. I'm glad I'm doing a good Anon-fic though. My main goal was to stay away from the tropes of AiE with Anon being a snarky, stupid dick, and the story being pure wish-fulfillment.
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Gender roles are very slightly reversed, it's not the extreme stuff, though. Stallions still act like stallions and mares act like mares, but the males still hold power in sexual negotiations, so mares are the ones who are doing the chasing and the stallions are in the position to be picky.
On an partially related note, my working theory on the extreme ReverseGenderRollEquetria where stallions do act prissy and the like is that mares are actually the stronger sex. It's like this, even though stallions are bigger, having more muscle mass, longer horns, and larger wingspans, this doesn't make them stronger because the true strength of ponies is determined by magic, and mares have more of it on average.
So even if an earth pony stallion is more muscular than an earth pony mare, the mare will most likely be stronger because she has more magic to fuel her strength. A pegasus stallion may have more impressive wings than a mare, but the mare has more magic to propel her through the sky.
And for unicorns, well that's self-explanatory.
Basically, size for stallions is a secondary feature more for attracting mates than being functional. A burly stallion is a healthy stallion and will give strong offspring. Same with wings and horn. Bulk Bicep is a very unattractive stallion to other pegasi, but earth pony mares find him sexy as all hell.
Almost too adorable. Almost. Because there's no such thing as too much adorable!
Ah, misunderstandings. Anon just used a figure of speech when saying 'date', and Floor took it at face value. Then again, no big surprise with her being a social recluse... yeah, this one's on him. Needs to watch out better what he says, even if it is hard to not say something you're casually using with others.
Either way, the fact remains that she needs someone to genuinely care for her (besides her grandma) in any shape or form. And Anon's doing a good job of it so far.
Still, squee!
So, let me get this straight, if i remember correctly he was short on money in the beginning correct? And he complained on the job that Celestia gave him because he wasn't all that good at much else?
However, he GAVE his cellphone to a bunch of nerds, and once they figured it out, pony technology would go leaps and bounds years ahead of what it currently is, and the payment he got was
"Oh once we made buckloads of money and gotten rich and famous for pretty much sky rocketing our current technology ahead atleast 30 years we promise to put the thing that started it together and make sure to make it compatible with our internet."
.......................Oh buck that! He should have demanded a sum of bits that had at least six zeros in it!
Our protagonist may be a really sweet and caring guy, but a buisness man he ain't.
Now, our fellow human buisness mentality aside, this was a great chapter, love how much our adorable little shut in is falling harder and harder for her caretaker, and how she is slowly breaking out of her shell and decided to try and woo him.
I really enjoyed all these small things they did together, laying puzzels and drawing, it was just precious.
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Stories in the Weedverse and Chaseverse from Kudzuhaiku respectively. Those chunks takes the 1 and 2 spot. third spot is Diaries of a Madman by whatmustido. This story, new though it be, will slide into 4
I love Floor even more now, I've ever met my father as well...
I love this and I want more. However I’m dreading some kind of future downturn.
Capitalize first word.
I cant wait for the grangran chapter! Im waiting for floor to get more embarassed than ever before by her grangran revealing floors family secrets and telling how anon nice and her would be together! Maybe im getting ahead of myself though
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its much better than what somebody else proposed
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Where's my cow?
Is that my cow?
It goes, "I'm not worthy of Anon!"
That's not my cow!
That's Floor Bored!
Shout out to Sir Samuel Vimes, Commander of the Ankh-Morpork City Watch, Duke of Ankh, Blackboard Monitor.
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What was proposed? That granny already passed away?
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yep.... I understand this story has dark themes, but that seems like a vertical downward spiral to me
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Yeah, that was just a guess on my part and certainly not where I hope this story would go. The cuteness and light harted affection is what gets me, and I just hope we get more soon
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I agree completely
Probably the best fic I have read in years I need more now
i just want this to end happily. i usually just want more from a fic but if this one ended next chapter on a happy note i would be happy.
i just sorta want floor to be content you know?
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Hahaha! XD
That must be the funniest comment on this site that I've ever seen!
I want to see more of this. It is so wholesome and heart warming. The guy kind of reminds me of myself, a green eyed nobody who decided to study the English language as a career and likes to write.
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That hurt!! I wipe my hand on you!! Sorry I mean "of" you not on you.
Finally caught up and I have to say that this is cute
A great artist, named after a great question!
But seriously, though. Why do we have nipples?! It's not like we use them for anything!
... Right?
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Its a byproduct of everyone being female in the womb at first.
(Also Whydomenhavenipples, otherwise known as Nips or McSweezy made Floor Bored as well, or at least I think so.)
Before I read this, is there a pastebin for the other stuff?
I've been away from /mlp/ for awhile now so I wouldn't know.
This story, man. It's good
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Though mine's not in a pastebin, there are of course other stories. They are listed at the top here: http://boards.4chan.org/mlp/thread/30701606#p30701606
And the current thread is here: http://boards.4chan.org/mlp/thread/30775260
Oh hey, I think I checked some dubs in one of the threads you posted in! Ain't that a co-inky-dink?
If you're as good as proper prose as you are with greentext, my thoughts will remain the same: cute story, would smooch Floor Bored. Also, reminder that NEETs are the closest you can get to a modern housewife.