A young human finds himself in Equestria, lost, not in body, but in purpose as he attempts to belong in the alien world. A mare, devoid of a destiny, seeks to end it all. Can these two stray souls find meanining in each other? Can they find more?
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Very nice chapter and the tension building has the feeling of leading to a drama filled climax.
Still as I think I have mentioned previously, no reason the two can't have a happy ending. With the conversation with the bossmare you could even have that act as foreshadowing Floor discovering her mark. Maybe NEETs have a fundamental stabilization of psychology once a mark is earned? Sort of a magical cure for mental illness.
Human history has shown we treat mental illness poorly and only now in the last 20-30 years is mental illness being looked at as having actual biological roots rather than "wrong thinking". Maybe in Equestria it goes a step further and NEETs are able to be cured of their issues if they do earn a mark?
Que CMC Destroyer of NEETs.
I am rambling. Your story. Ignore me!
Floor is a native kekistani I see
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I agree with it.
I want that shipping to happen in the end, but first I think the "talk" he mentioned should happen maybe. I need some emotions, maybe a devasted Floor Bored before they can move to taking this relationship seriously.
It is more or less like his boss said here, it would probably look a bit odd if it just works out without one big emotional moment here if you know what I mean.
This chapter felt right even if I disliked the boss, but at the same time I could understand her.
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Yeah, in situations like the a person/pony like boss lady can come across as insensitive. But As someone who's worked in HR for 12 years I can understand why she's like that. We have to learn how to detach ourselves from a situation otherwise we'll go bonkers from stress. When you're overseeing hundreds or thousands of individuals, it becomes rather hard to divy up your attention and empathy.
For the scene at the computer, it was nice of him to be thinking about presents for his friend, and I can wholeheartedly agree that upgrading the RAM on her computer would be welcomed. I recently did the same for my own and... I'm so happy! It takes only like 6 seconds for it to fully boot up now. Thank the gods for technological innovation. I can just imagine the smile Floor would have on her face after the upgrade.
And as for what'll happen next chapter... I'm curious to see exactly how Anon will handle that particular talk. I don't think Floor will handle it well. Though maybe they'll be able to work past it, and later when Floor isn't entirely emotionally dependent on him they can progress further.
I'd like to see the shipping, but I want to see a stable Floored first. She's got to do things consistently for the sake of taking care of herself. At this point a lot of it is still because she wants Anon pleased with her and if his opinion wasn't a factor she might be slipping back into old habits.
It's apparent that Index is concerned with both Floor and Anon. With both being very vulnerable. Anon would have become involved with Floor for her safety, and protection, and Floor her dependency on Anon as an emotional crutch.
Over all a very good story, with possibility of ending happily, or finishing in a tragic for both characters, or a near endless number of conclusions in between ether point.
This and Family are my two favorite stories of yours.
They are great stories in their own rights.
Keep up the great work
The Monk
Let the awkwardness begin in the next chapter.
Floor. Kill the Roomba. Anything that treats rāmen in such a way deserves death. Kill it with fire!!!
That Roomba is a smiling Cyclops. Just like Anon.
I ain't exactly the greatest author, but feel free to PM me if you'd like a little help. I love this story and I wouldn't mind lending a hand to help out when I'm available.
Great chapter and a funny comic all in one? Looking forward to more as always
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Oh, I hope the story ends happily! A relationship between the two of them would be unhealthy right now, but maybe they'll get together AFTER Anon helps her. Floor Bored is too precious to be exposed to a tragic ending.
Oh dear, this is dangerously close to a mire with no sexy times in sight.
It was only a matter of time until he'd find Floor's drawings. It's probably good that thoughts of romantic involvement between the two are already on his mind. I just hope they're both able to sort their feelings out for each other sooner rather than later. Thanks for the update KoB!
Sounds more like you need a better HDD and CPU rather than a GPU.
> tfw a roomba knocks over your cup of spaghetti
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Spaghetti? That looks like cup a ramen to me. Spaghetti cups sound cool tho