A young human finds himself in Equestria, lost, not in body, but in purpose as he attempts to belong in the alien world. A mare, devoid of a destiny, seeks to end it all. Can these two stray souls find meanining in each other? Can they find more?
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I'm really glad she actually told her grandmother the truth. The feels
A nice chapter, glad to see this updated. I've really enjoyed the story so far and I'm interested to see where and how things continue. A lot of it is honestly very heartwarming, and Floor seems so cute
While that is true, it would leave her ramen exposed, and NEETs are very protective of their main food source.
Having your granny throwing sexual innuendos at you while your spouse is barley out of ear shot, not traumatising at all.
I love this story. :)
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I don't think the translator gave me the word, that the perverted grandma meant.
I don't know if I said it already and she is already defending him, but I hope they actually start to notice that he isn't one of their males and maybe not one that exactly needs the amount of protection they think they need to give him.
I think I already said that you are maybe slightly overdoing it with the grandmother, but otherwise a nice chapter.
I officially petition that Floor's grandma be renamed Nasty Nana.
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I think 'shacking up', usually means having sex and sleeping together.
Beets are great! But eat too much and it can cause stones and gout. Also turns your poop and pee red. Speaking from experiance on that last one
Welp...
I'm all caught up. Loving the feels toward the end of the chapter. It's good that Floor finally told her grandmother what happened, and Gramgram's reaction was spot on. Can't wait for more updates—hell, this story is so good that it has made it into my scarcely populated 'Email Updates' bookshelf.
In other words, moar plz.
" why does god hate me " i would like to know , why does Celestia hate her ? her mother tragically passed away and she almost did too . Mostly because despite being talented , she could not manage to obtain a cuttie mark . Which makes me remember , is the reason going to be biological and not floor's fault ? that possibility needs to be raised further at least
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I demand more floor art. I don't know why but I love it all. Also good chapter.
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ahhh okay thank you. the translator really went in a different direction,.
Have no idea why I hadn't started reading this sooner. Regretting that now. Also regretting catching up cause now I have to wait for more lol.
Amazing story all the way. Loving it!
There are few stories that hit the heartstrings that this one does.
I’m looking forward to reading the rest.
Good character development for Floor there. GramGram is just too much. I love her. Thanks for the udpate KoB! I look forward to reading the next one.
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Why can't we have more platypus ponies?
They don't do much, but they make eveything better.
Just read through this in a day after being recommended by BikerPon3 in his latest story.
I loved the arc that Floor has gone through up to this point, and the bonus chapters were hilarious as well.
I like the take on Anon in these, he doesn't seem to be nearly the shameless caricature of humanity that he normally is. I generally don't really like Anon stories, as I like the characters to have names. This one stood out however, and I really enjoyed his personality due to the relatability. He's a bit dense at social cues, but I liked how genuine he seems in his interactions.
Great story so far mate, cheers!
such a touching Chapter! amazing story thus far.
Come back soon pls
This story is absolutely beautiful and touches a chord in me. I hope it continues.
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It will, I've just been Playing Dragon Quest 11 for the last month and that's been eating up my free time. Almost have it finished, though.
Then I have to get back to the next chapter of my other story, then, finally, I can continue this.
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Oh, thank christ. I can't tell you how many amazing authors I've seen just disappear without a word. It's the most disheartening thing in the world when you see an author you love disappear without a single word. It's like looking at an old black-and-white photo of your grandparents; there's a story that was last updated 2 years ago, and then a blog post made a year after that saying "Sorry for disappearing, but I'm back and better than ever!" and then silence.
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Also you should proof-read every chapter on you're and your, so many mistakes
Why does Celestia or Luna hate Floor?