A young human finds himself in Equestria, lost, not in body, but in purpose as he attempts to belong in the alien world. A mare, devoid of a destiny, seeks to end it all. Can these two stray souls find meanining in each other? Can they find more?
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Good shit sir, hopefully see more on /mlp/ soon
Well, that happened. But hey, feet/hooves massages are a small price to pay for food that's cooked to perfection!
This was a welcome and enjoyable variation from the main storyline, but the new Floored threw me off at first. I could have used a small AU warning ahead, though I suppose I should have expected the to be an AU from the “omake” in the chapter title
*Begins reading*
Ramen
Chopsticks
Umami Paradise
You fucking weeb.
Keep this up you glorious bastard!
*Reads bonus omake*
Why did I expect anything else? I must be blind.
God, big bowl of ramen sounds awesome right about now.
I love the idea that your doing of adding short little 'one shots' occasionally between chapters. I think that it is a fun and rather different idea. As for Floor being different in your "One Shots", I don't think its a problem at all. Floor Bored was created by the legions that make up Anonymous, and therefor she has no real set personality or history other than to say that she is a NEET. It is fun to see different versions of her. I think you should do more of them, if the urge comes up.
Happy New Years to you 'Kind of Brony' and congrats on another fun chapter.
The Monk
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Aw yiss...
On My...
Hoof Rubs golly gee this is getting intense!
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Also cheeses and a lot of ocean plant life.
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And cuddling later. That degenerate Anon is whoring himself out for ramen.
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I don't know what this is supposed to mean.
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This Floor is super into anime and is a full blown weeboo.
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It really is.
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All hail to the Pastamancer
Loved the bonus ^-^
thing i would like to see if floor trying to somehow impress/appeal for anon and failing, kinda kicking her back a bit in terms of self asteem and self confidence.
might sound mean, but it seems to currently be much more liniear with floor getting more and more confident as time goes on.
or maybe i just overlooked something, idk
This is amazing. Please never stop writing this story.
If they weren't all arguing about some inane subject while gangbanging her, I'll be sad.
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I so want to reply in kind... but no.
That is now how 2nd person writing actually works. Sure, you can write in 3rd person and then slap a 2nd person label on it, but that doesn't actually make it 2nd person.
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Feels bad when you don't fit into the "anyone" category.
Finds comic of Floor Bored crying over Mister Rogers on Derpibooru and cries over it, wants to read more stuff involving Floor Bored, googles stuff, accidentally encounters the greentext of this fic, follows the Fimfic link to here, realizes that you're the same guy that's writing Gilded Sister which I've read all the way through and loved every word of and is one of my favorite fics
How did this happen.
Anyway, this fic is amazing and I love it.
I am really looking forward to when the next chapter comes out...whenever that is
You have now ruined any clop scene in your story with that “smells like fish and hay” line. Stories over burn it all to the ground. Game over.
Where is my next chapter button!?!
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What does 2nd and 3rd person writing look like to you? 2nd person is "you do this, you do that", which is what this story is doing, while 3rd person is "he does this, he does that". Hell, for clarity's sake, 1st person writing is "I do this, I do that". I'm not sure where the confusion is coming from.
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I don't know what to say, man, there's a reason Human In Equestria is a separate category from Anon In Equestria. They're two separate things that attract different groups of people for different reasons. Anon is there purely to make it easier to insert yourself into the story, not because the writer is lazy. It's the difference between "ME in Equestria" and "Samuel, the 45 year old gardener in Equestria" Do you go to Pony On Earth stories too and complain how boring and lazy they are since the writers use an already established world instead of getting creative and writing about Equestria? Don't complain about things you don't understand.
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Not an anthro. She just wears clothes for reasons.
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Started working on the next chapter already. I've actually written enough material for, like, another three omake chapters, but I figured I should get back to the main story instead.
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I am not one to tell an author what to do. But the side stories should be put in a side story. It kinda messes with the flow of this art you have here. Also I thank you for letting me know you're still typing away love you
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OH BOY 😃
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Any chapter marked omake is not canon and just something I wrote on a whim at some point and decided to store here.
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Good good, I can enjoy such a character (with a...?...well what you did with her) , but would still prefer it if the actually thing takes a while and is quite heartwarming in a way. She is a character where I image a cute confession or something can be pretty effective in the story.
Not my chapter. the other stuff was better, I liked the one with Fluttershy too. However I wasn't so sure of Twilight being there, because most of the time they write her like the first reaction would be, that Twilight is forcing her worldview and values on everyone who isn't her or whorships the sungoddes.
That means even if the characters has done nothing bad most of the time the first reaction is that Twilight means something bad for some reason, at least princess Twilight.