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Autin Brony


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Prince Rutherford receives a letter informing him of his shortcomings.
This takes place in an alternate ending to party pooped were Prince Rutherford declares war
This is intended to be read in the form of a one sided letter.
i have been informed my story is very similar to letter-to-the-griffon-emperor i did not know that story existed prior to writing this but please check it out if you can its pretty good

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The biggest enemy of ponies might be themselves. Do they really have the morally preparation of killing someone else even though it is in good intention?

8368505
Its his job to convince enemy's of the nation to not fight, they don't want war but they don't want others to think there week enough to push around , and you have to admit the yaks were being way out of line.

some times you have to do what you have to do simple as that.

Mortiferous Bloodfire isn't evil hes just old enough to know its almost impossible to make the stupid see reason and when reason doesn't work fear is the next best option.

In other word, "ARE RULER IS A FUCKING SUN GOD"

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And with this letter the Yaks collectively pee'd there pants realizing who they just declared war with

I'd be willing to like this story if it weren't a worse version of a pre existing story that was presented much earlier than this one, by about a year or two, not only is it a near carbon copy with names changed around, it also doesn't drive home the points as well as the other one, somehow feeling quite lacking, however I can probably just chalk that up to the original content being that much better, sadly sir/madam/it I'll have to leave a dislike and a report to the moderators, because not only is the content the same but the format, style and plot as well, I'll also be notifying the person you practically copied this from.

Good day

8370029
i can honestly say i did not rip anyone off i have never seen the story you are referring to what is it called

8370127
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/180434/a-letter-to-the-griffon-emperor-on-the-matter-of-war

That's the story I'm talking about
And I personally find it a little hard to believe considering the similarities that you haven't seen it but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt

8370613

thank you for that, i really had not seen that fic prior to now im i honestly more interested in writing them then reading them.

and i do agree that both fictions are very similar. but i can assure you that was a pure coincidence.

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