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can you do a story mrs.shy getting gangbang by Zebras
Okay, here are all of the errors I've noticed:
Pegasi flew
faced
Capitalize "at", and put a comma between lawn and barely.
gust
Remove that first "other"
ya
Needs a second quotation mark at the end.
And I'm not so sure Scoots would ever call RD "Mrs. Dash".
Too
popped
Realizing
began
surprised
only seen her father's
Capitalize she
Replace "form" with "from"
Butt
began
let's
made
her
ornaments
liked
ornaments
liked
pubic
whimpered
breathe for both
mentor's
Capitalize rainbow
Capitalize rainbow again
Missing an "a" between "in" and "deep"
Capitalize rainbow a third time, and don't need that quote mark at the end
Missing a quotation mark at the beginning
"pull her hind legs up"
Chillax
No idea what that last part is supposed to say.
ton
I've
slid
whether
virgin's
filly's
let's
Replace "continues her" and "continued to"
loved
Scootaloo's
Capitalize take.
and
her
Rainbow chuckled
laid
"work as she licked and sucked"
too
began
Capitalize rainbow
of
"most of the"
laid
"up on top"
laid
thought
"thoughts wander into"
Could you do a non rape story?
8347439
The sheer amount of grammatical errors is enough to turn me away. I get that it's clop and all, but have some proofreading... You're a braver person than I.
8347513
Maybbbbeee. I am originally a horror chick writer so i don't know. I mean i guess i could just like this but less ropes right?
8347535
It also helps that I'm the one who requested it, actually.
8347553
Better idea. Do a Saw theme story with no raoe in it
8347535
Yes i know, the reading has been fixed. Thank you so much Super fan for that. I hate posting stories on my own because i always screw it up and i haven't quiet figured out how to get a proof reader access before it is published
Nice one and dont mind the dislikes its only haters
8347654
No the dislikes were from before, before i fixed all the grammar and what not. I don't blame anyone for those.
8347608
If you set a password on the unpublished story, then users other than the author will be able to access it (using the correct password of course).
8347803
it needs work every time you say Scootaloo however make sure it's Scootaloo, however, ... how much grammar is being missed well there is about 72 critical issues on it. Then you have 52 advance grammar issues. T_T If it's been fixed now i'm still seeing the 72 critical grammar loss. with about 52 advance along with it. You need to find someone with free professional skills to fix that.
One quick correction that's not in the story itself:
I'm a guy
8347963
Yeah i suck at grammar but the person helping me helped in a lot of my mistakes. Honestly would have been 10 times worse before she read it. And yeah look for professional help but the only person i know who majors in this thing is my mom. Do you understand why i can't really go to her on the matter?
Best. Line. Ever.
I'm definitely going toread another one of your stories now.