Nice to see this story over on FimFiction. This is exactly the sort of ABDL story that I love to read, forced trapped, and mind alterations into the new role. I think my favored part is the one with Starlight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash. I hope the this story and its sequel will be popular around here.

I'm glad that you uploaded this story to fimfiction. I really like it overall, with a good setup, and interesting traps and such. I personally enjoyed Twilight's, Rarity's, Celestia's, and Luna's parts of the story, the most. Are you planning to upload the sequel as well?

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Yep, mostly not sure whether to do it as part of this story or as a separate one.

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Hhmm, might be better to upload as a sequel instead. Just because it does kind of start off as a sequel does and such. Either way would be good though.

How come this is on incomplete instead of complete?

8334643
Wasn't sure how to do the sequel, as another bit on this story or as a separate story.

8334645
How bout separate story.

Not bad I suppose but I liked more the parts of Luna