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stephamazin


Just a teen girl with a dark sense of humor and a love of cartoons P.S. Fluttershy is best pony

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*Alternate AU where Fluttershy never fell from Cloudsdale* *FlutterDash*
From birth Fluttershy had always been a weak flier. In junior flight camp she met Rainbow Dash a much more courageous filly than she was. Dash stood up to bullies no problem even when they made fun and called her Rainbow Crash.

Dash takes Fluttershy under her wing which ends in both being the target of bullies. Which somehow results in them receiving anonymous death threats from Fluttershy. Fluttershy's dependence on Rainbow eventually leaves Fluttershy unable to function without her.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 18 )

Do You Really Love Me Unconditionally?

Not really. I have trust issues.

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results in them receiving anonymous death threats from Fluttershy.

From Fluttershy. That's savage. Sending death threats to herself.

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There's going to be a lot of build up first but I think I'll enjoy writing that chapter the most

In the paragraph where derpy says they laughed at her change at to and

other than that this is a good story

I sense some Yuno Gasai action in the near future.

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thank you for pointing that out I fixed it

I love the take you took on the whole obsession thing. its a wonderful story.

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Thank you I really appreciate the compliment

What do you mean by "parts that feel sexual"?

I really like how this story is coming! I like it's very dark aspect and can't wait for more! :twilightsmile:

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I'm not sure if I'm going to do that part anymore because it would leave the story feeling ambiguous.

Plot is actually very unique and well thought out, but the writing feels a bit mechanical I guess? Not too sure how to describe it, but it didn't really feel like a ton of character were in the characters (ya feel me?). Nevertheless, loved reading the story and can't wait to see what else you put out.

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