Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! Always good to see more scat writers.

8302461
Thanks.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

8302606
Is all you do bitch about scat stories?

8302768
Some people really do have nothing better to do with their lives than downvote/hate on fetish stories on fimfiction.net on a Sunday. Its truly sad.

8302779
I believe sad is putting mildly I say it's more pathetic

Love it so far, it kept making me squirm in my seat. :P
Would it be okay if I use some inspiration for a Rainbow Dash POV story I'm planning to write?

8302606
Dont like it? Leave.

Also, good story concept but you could do some proofreading. Im sure some messy pony here would do it gladly.

i love it nice story :)

8302606
Well, if you don't like this, than at least we have 40k in common.

8302825
Sure, and thanks for the praise.
8302965
I do have someone, but I was an idiot and submitted without talking to them.

8303209
It's not over yet.

I love this kind~

I don't want to weigh in on the subject matter itself but I wish you people slamming this with downvotes would explain yourselves.

How can we improve if we're pissing you off and you say nothing?

8304753
They have convinced themselves that the fetish is inherently evil and think that hating on it in mass will scare us away. No point trying to reason with them, it's like talking to a brick wall.

8304753
What I've learnt, is that if a scat fic is around half and half with votes, it is usually good.

Really good, I love your stories! It would have been really hot to see Rainbow join Blaze and Fleetfoot hahaha anyway, keep up the good work. I hope that you also have some time to finish the sisters story.

8305844
She just might.

need more pls

Hope you update soon :D Also I really hope Dashie "Samples" some of her "Chocolate"

Update soon? Pls?

rip

We're still here!

I hope everything is fine. This story is amazing, it would be perfect to get an update of this story as a Christmas present hahaha