• Member Since 1st Feb, 2017
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LaikenPone


Inspired by the magic of friendship, I decided to write short and not so short fictional stories about small magical horses. May contain other fantasy creatures and hazelnuts.

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After a part of the obstacle course at the Wonderbolts Camp broke during an exercise, Spitfire is sure that somepony must have sabotaged the course. With Copper Top, she calls in the best crime investigator from Manehattan to solve the case. But even if she didn't found exactly what she was looking for, her investigation leads to an even bigger crime than just sabotage.

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Comments ( 5 )

A very well written story, the mystery was intriguing, and the characters were interesting enough to keep me entertained throughout the whole story.

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Glad you appreciated it! More coming soon so stay tuned if you're interested^^

Amazing story will you be writing more on copper top or is this character a one time thing

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"Shadows on the Wall" is the direct sequel. I'm currently working on the third story and I've also finished the storylines for five others focused on Copper Top. I get to them as soon as possible. And thanks that you liked them, I really appreciate it!

Cool story! My favorite part was the letter with the threats; that one looked serious. It's nice that you left some things still unsolved, so you can write a sequel. Needless to say, I'm looking forward to reading that one too. :pinkiehappy:

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