Bounty Hunting

Spending a nice evening in a restaurant on the last day of her special vacation, Copper Top's next case literally falls from the sky. Everything looks like an accident but one detail is more than suspicious to the young Detective. But even if Copper Top soon has to realize, that not all of her plans will work out at the end, she still knows that she has friends she can always rely on.

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Dec 29th, 2017 · · ·

If Copper Top was voiced, what would she sound like?

forrest yuchnitz

forrest yuchnitz #2 · Dec 29th, 2017 · · ·

so this whole thing finished without seeing the aftermath like him actually getting caught or finding more evidence about police corruption thats kinda lame

Elkia Deerling

Elkia Deerling #3 · Dec 31st, 2017 · · ·

Wow, that was a cool story! I keep loving these kind of mysteries more and more, because they are original and clever. You inserted the backstory about Papa Kamra and his illegal doings very nicely at the right moments. The dialogue was very good, and the Gladmane thing makes perfect sense.

The casino disappearing with magic is also very realistic. I mean, the series is called 'Friendship is Magic' for a reason. I didn't expect that, anyway.

It was a very nice read, and I am sure that the police officer is a partner of Gladmane too, because he dialled so quickly. I'm very sure he called Gladmane and told him of Copper Top's raid. Am I right?

Keep writing stories like these, because you are so good at that. I'd love to read the next Copper Top stories when they come out. But don't rush anything!

Keep on writing,

Elkia

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