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poor mare
I am in love with this story and character. He is everything great about Flicker Nicker, except with more personality. I look forward too watching him grow and evolve.
Also, you know that common complaint/plothole 'Just think how much simpler it would be he/she killed He/She.'...
Yeah I think it's fairly safe to say Dim Dark is the living embodiment of that phrase.
Hard chapter, wonder if Dim will do what she asks in the end
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I like Dim and Flicker both have darkness and issues that move them past normal ponies
Curtis marks can be evil vile things. The poor Marie's cuttie mark is never mentioned but her drive seems to give some indication what it might be. Mare gets raped so often her purpose in life becomes having sex and she gets a cuttie mark sealing her fate with that kind of destiny. She went from slave to other ponies to slave to her cuttie mark. There are ponies out there that actually would be happier having lived in Our Town when Starlight still governed it.
Also starting to wonder what percentage of your DNA has to be pony to get a cuttie mark. Negara and Blackbird are each half pony but don't seem to get cuttie marks.
If writing this story leaves you feeling <insert emotion here>, it just means you're doing something right. Otherwise how could you expect your story to have any emotional impact on your readers?
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After explicitly stating that he has been suffering from sexual dysfunction, how can he?
Does nobody pay attention to the details?
I wonder if Cadance's therapists make it out this far? Chancy could benefit.
Of course Dim could too, even if he is having almost civil conversations with folks recently.
How curious...
Oh that poor dear...
That's the stuff that's depressing it is. Not as tragic as Dim, but still tragic.
It IS a chapter about awkward times, Kuzdu. A little self-feels are normal.
Whoawhoawhoa, wait a minute.
Dim's only seventeen?
And he left the Dark Tower two(?) years ago? At fifteen?
He's not even an adult yet and this is/has been his life?
Damn. That puts a different spin on things, poor bastard.
He is both very impressively skilled and broken for his age.
The Darks sure knew how to make their tools swiftly and well.
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Hasn’t been two years. He left in winter, it is now summer. It’s been months.
Darling was 14, as mentioned in the prologue of the first story, and Dim was two years older.
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It isn't nearly that the cutie mark is to blame. There's many things a pony can do beyond their cutie mark. I mean Applejack has talent in Rodeos, for instance, and she doesn't have a Rodeo cutie mark. Pinkie Pie can play a variety of Non-Party Musical Instruments. Etc.
Fact of the matter is...Ponies are MORE than their cutie marks. Dim's childhood "Playmate" was shaped and molded to be the pony she was. Everything with her life, was to teach her to be Dim's Slave & Cocksleeve. She gave herself fully into her Cutie Mark, to become lost to it completely, as she was made, encouraged, and taught to be. Everything in her life taught her to give everything that she was and ever will be to Dim & his Mother. The fact that he made her feel good and appeared to care for her, further helped reinforce these beliefs. She was WEAK, both born and raised to be so, and she gave into it instead of fighting her weakness like Dim has been.
Hell look at the character Dexter. He's a serial killer who preys upon the Wicked such as Pedos, Murderers, Serial Killers, etc. He had and still has a choice to be just like those whom he preys upon, to be someone who destroys the Good & Innocent. Yet he channels his Evil into being a tool used for the Greater Good.