• Member Since 27th Jun, 2017
  • offline last seen Jan 3rd, 2021

4ooves


I'm being followed by these dark figures, and I can't hear myself whisper due to the voices in my head... I'm seeking help but no-one seems to care about a lonely colourful horse...

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Suffering is a bunch of scrambled up descriptive writing that I wrote when I was still in high school. There's barely any character development and no story telling within it, as of this moment. Not even a plot... BUT before you click off I am planning on coming back to polish this up and work towards a plot and an interesting story because that'd be quite nice to build.

For a disclaimer, Suffering is going to include topics like:

Kidnapping.
Depression and other mental health issues I have.
Murder.
Sex.
Suicide.
And more topics.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Seeing as you are new here, welcome to FIMFiction! I hope that you enjoy reading and writing fanfictions of one of the best cartoons!

So, as for your story, it has an interesting premise. Having a main character with a crippling anxiety(?) can be a really good foundation to start from. I would love to see how this character progresses, and how many dimensions that you can give him/her.

You forgot the self insert tag, based off of how your OC and your account share the same name.

Welcome to Fimfiction, anyways! :pinkiehappy:

Date: 2017/11/11

Just to note I've looked upon "Twisted Relations" and corrected some grammar mistakes.

Comment posted by 4ooves deleted Apr 27th, 2019
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