Great story man you are awesome. who's next?

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I'll let you know after I've finished some of the chapters from my other stories. I'm way overdue with them

Alright man

I wonder what's next

Oh hell yeah, Flure dis Lee X Brony usa

Cant remember when was the last time i read a Fleur story, nice job.

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thank you.

I wanderer what fleur and me have some plans for the future?

I wander what Fleur dis Lee going to react when I took her with me to the USA

🇫🇷Fleur dis Lee🇫🇷 🇺🇸BRONY USA🇺🇸

I'm going to have kids when fleur was prengnet. (And throes kids are French/mexican American)

What about a clopfic for Gilda and/or any of the other female gryphons?

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I'll include Gilda later on.

"Just because I'm a model, doesn't mean that I'm someone's property!"

I think this will be a inspired Quoth for Women that Fleur Gave.

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Yeah, I wanted her to be a strong, independent mare while having a nice side to her

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Well genus, I think she serves as a Example for Women are Strong and Brave, and Independent and in the meantime I think her Independents will slap The Rat-haired Fool and the Unstable monkey in the Face on how they Treat Women like that and I think she will slap Moises the Second in the Face for Treating Women like there Slaves and Property.

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And you know what Genus. I think The One that is similar to Fleur's Independents kina Reminds me of The Simpsons episode called Homer's Night Out.

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And also I know that How she want's to be Strong and Independent, that's a Reference to Modeca

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Question, is this pink mane pony is a strong, independent mare while having a nice side to her like in the show because I don't see it since she's a background character.

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She'll get a backstory eventually, just be patient

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Okay

Lucky Man

I would give anything to be this guy. Fleur is certainly a caring mare, loving, passionate and beyond sexy....beyond Cadence sexy and that is saying a lot.

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. Even though we don't know what he looks like.

"What's the matter, darling, don't you like what you see?" she asked, placing her hands on her hips and twirling around, showing you her beautiful hourglass figure. You could feel your pants getting tighter and she could tell her seductive charm was working. "I'll take that as a yes. Now show me what you're packing underneath that suit of yours, my darling Fortis." she demands in a sultry tone.

You might want to divide this into two or three paragraphs, like below:

"What's the matter, darling?" Fleur teasingly asked before placing her hands on her hips and slowly twirling around, showing you her beautiful hourglass figure. "Don't you like what you see?"

You never replied as you took in every detail of Fleur's beautiful body. In fact, you could feel your pants getting tighter the longer you stared at her, which caused your cheeks to blush a darker red. Of course, Fleur could tell her seductive charm was working on you.

"I'll take that as a yes. Now, show me what you're packing underneath that suit of yours, my darling Fortis," she demands in a sultry tone.

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Wow, you got a good eye when it comes to edits.

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Thanks.

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You're welcome.