Good start and we need more stories like this with Fleur.

8290830
thank you. I really appreciate it

So far a pretty good story.

Any chance your next story will feature Rara?

8291489
I'll include Rara, but I still gotta finish up Fleur's story and a few others

8291606
Fair enough. I just wanted to know if you had a story with her planned out.

8293407
Cadance is already married. I can't interfere with married couples. Especially since she and Shining already have Flurry

8293807
thanks. Glad you like them

Just noticed something strange. When (me) told Fleur that i shot my dad, She seemed to understand what i meant by "shooting" since she didn't question it. What im trying to say is do ponies possess firearms in this story or what?

Great story. Giving it a follow

8294061
She knows that the guy and his dad shot each other, but he never explained what they shot each other with, so she thinks that they both shot each other with a "fatal magic blast," but if you want, I can have the character explain it in the next chapter after their night of passion

8298651
I'll include them, but the order is going to be random.

The runt of the litter?! Now that's messed up. And they call themselves parents?

8304714
Yeah! I agree with you there!

Looks like I'm living with my wifu now. [Note to self: put a USA flag on the flag pole]