Hi, I'm just a dude who likes ponies, horror, comedy, and video games.
What happens when you take an ancient being just as old as The Creator, put him in charge of Tartarus, and then have him meet our beloved ponies? You get this wacky, semi-serious Dark Comedy dealing with Death, Immortality, and Demons. Please welcome Pluto/Osiris, The Revenant King!
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i like the story so far
lets see where this goes
I like this story keep up the good work update more soon
ineresting premier.
but i think it needs more world buliding. (how tartarus looks like, does it have a sky? What color? how are the alicorns dresed? are they sared? any manerism? etc)
i'm not asking you to make 10k word chapter, but chapters with more juice would be fine.
Ether way you have my curiosity. keep up the good work.
8159760 Thanks! I will try to describe tartarus later on. Also, interpret the tone of the characters, that makes it fun. Also, think a cross between Hell and Tartarus of Greek legend: Burning, desolate, depressing, conscriting.
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Then instead of the king saying "There they are" af if the alicorn are walking in a deolate plane with nothing for miles that makes them stand out, it ould be something like.
"nearing my target, in beteen jaged hills and flowing river of magma, four figures aproach my domain. Four Aliconrs that shouldn't be here...."
or something like that. you don't have to be very especific. only enoughf to understand the setting and let our imagination fill in the blanks
8160524 of course, of course. Though, you might be surprised by his office!
more coming?
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YES, along with other pony stories involving OCs, and one involving Spike raised by the TF2 team.
Also, sorry if this chapter is a little... short. This was made on short notice.