• Published 4th May 2017
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Portal - Alexshy



Authors often face misunderstanding. When the closest ones don't understand your passion and never suport you, a tragedy can happen. Sometimes even the almighty alicorn princess can't save the author in crisis. But there is always hope for the best!

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Comments ( 9 )

This is some weapons grade wangst.

what happens after that :/

8140816
It's up to reader to decide :trollestia: Or one may write a sequel, if finds that worthy.

Personally I see 3 variants of explanation of the story itself and 2 variants of the result of "entering" the "portal".

1. The character has gone mad and everything (magical) happens in his head. The result: death. But this doesn't explain the obvious clues to Luna and everything else being real: feathers, lavender scent, wife's reaction, people outside reaction, etc. People don't get mad or/and hallucinate the same way in masses.

2. The character is mistaking, despite all that happens is real. The result: death. Luna has yet another reason to be sad.

3. The character's calculation is right, what happens is real. The result: he gets transferred, reborn, resurrected in Equestria, meets Luna and... they live happily ever after. We may hope.

Which one do you like?

8140845 i don't know it's your story i just want to know what happens or maybe it's good like this

8142059
Well, feel free to choose from the variants under spoiler tags then :raritystarry:
I like the 3rd one, personally, but it kinda makes the story less sad... so I dunno :derpytongue2:

Or take it as a cliffhanger...

8142074 who knows myself i like the 3rd one too

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Thanks. But beest aware it's far from some walk in the park. Reader's discretion advised.

I too Love Princess Luna but as her daughter . Luna is my Mother and so is Princess Nightmare Moon and Princess Celestia as also Princess Twilight and Princess Cadence . Annnnd The Griffin Queen and King are my Mother and Father. As well as a Dragon Queen . How you ask ? Only my psychiatrist knows and he ain't saying a word .Well I don't have a psychiatrist yet .:pinkiecrazy: Eh who needs one anyway ? I'm as sane as anypony . :twilightblush: * Must cutback on the coffee intake :facehoof:*MOM ! ( Luna ) I NEED HEEEELP ! :raritydespair::raritycry::fluttercry:

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