The Element of Reality

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Everypony knows how competitive can this particular duo get - Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
So just a few weeks after getting the Elements of Harmony, it's natural for Rainbow Dash to start thinking about who got the best Element.
What she uncovers will change a lot.

I've started this story a long time ago, hence it takes place early in the series (duh) - that means unicorn Twilight and the Elements of Harmony!

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HJSDGCE

HJSDGCE #1 · Apr 30th, 2017 · · · Just try until you can ·

... Is this a Matrix reference?

Also, as funny as this story is, it went to some kind of uncanny valley to me that it becomes disturbing. Dunno why.

Love it though. Are you going to continue this or will it just be a one-shot?

Crescent-087

Crescent-087 #2 · Apr 30th, 2017 · · · Just try until you can ·

The formatting for the speech marks is all messed up in the first half of the story.

"Instead of them being like this."

,,They look like this."

Just a nitpick that just reeeally put me off reading this. I noticed that it corrects itself in the second half, so I continued on. From what I can see it's an interesting premise, although I can't really see where you could go from here with it....

superfun

superfun #3 · Apr 30th, 2017 · · · Just try until you can ·

Let me guess:
The pen is blue is a reference to Liar, Liar.

...And it's odd that we live in a world where I haven't even SEEN that movie, yet I recognize the reference.

owocowy

owocowy #4 · Jun 9th, 2017 · · · Just try until you can ·

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