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ThatOneVolcarona


Just an Ecuatorian brony/pokefan that likes to write stuf

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7964171 Yay~ Ausbrony has a really tight and complicated schedule, yet even so we'll try to provide you with at least two updates per month, say perhaps every two Mondays. We'll see how it goes.

So, no offense, but why didn't you disciribe the mare was a unicorn? I honestly thought she was a bat pony, the image tag you had sorta decieved me.

7964481 - For later. But we won't tell because spoilers :trollestia:

So is this a spinoff of Tall Tale Trouble just like Midnight is an alternate variation of her counterpart in Shifting Melodies! Pocket is not with Midnight in this story or what? :rainbowhuh: I am simply so confused over the amount of similar character different universe thing. I already have Crazy Canterlot Catastrophe to look forward to after reading SM, now I have yet another Pocket to look forward to!

I am adding this to my want to read list, but I am just so stupidly confused right now :pinkiecrazy:

7965054 - Yeh. Same characters. Different universe.

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At first I thought it was Tall Tale from Pocket's perspective and a bunch of clop added in! You should probably do that! But I have so much to look forward to from you two!

Damn this is a good read I need more

May I say that you've done an outstanding job? This work of art is brilliant and I'm a little curious to see how this will play out. Also, on a lesser note, Inspired Words is just like me except that unlike him I don't keep my work. It usually ends up...in the trash.

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D'awww thanks for the kind words ^^ And I hope I can keep this quality up

Elu

The author hasn't been here for months.

Damn, such a good story and it won't be continued.

8286473 - Actually, we'd written quite a few chapters, but in the end. I had a change of heart and now the story is undergoing a total rewrite. Sorry..

And now? It was finally time to close her eyes and rest. Heh. You did it again Pockets. You did it again…

I don't know if I'd considering "falling unconscious in someone's with all the stolen loot" a success :moustache:

The next thing she noticed was a silver band around her right hoof, and a curious sound coming from somewhere in the house. Some kind of humming?

That silver band is probably important :coolphoto:

She didn’t trust him, Something was very wrong in here. This stallion just randomly took her in and took care of her injuries even after finding out she had stolen a bunch of crap. That? That didn’t sound right at all.

Yeah, remember that band around your leg, yeah you might want to look into that :moustache:

“Ever been burned by dragon fire?” he asked as he closed the door and fetched a jar of the foulest-smelling substance she’d ever had the displeasure of smelling. And that was saying something.

I am both curious and concerned about why that is your example :trixieshiftright:

“It’s a cloud mattress,” he replied calmly, promptly raining on that particular parade. “Why do you think you’re wearing that cloudwalking charm around your leg?” he wing gestured to the silver band she’d forgotten she was wearing.

Oh, I thought it was something else, but good to know :moustache:

“The necklace wasn’t amongst the stolen goods sadly.” The guard shook her head, “We believe she hid it while escaping. This necklace holds enough power to turn a regular unicorn into an alicorn-level mage. It must be retrieved immediately.”

Well doesn't that sound familiar :trixieshiftleft:

“Deal. But only because you're cute, you amuse me, and you got me coffee.” Secure snorted as she turned and motioned to follow them. With the powers of coffee to her side, she was starting to feel more like her usual self.

I have no doubt the latter was a damn good motivator :moustache:

“Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt,” Inspired muttered.

It was a pretty nice t-shirt :moustache:

“N-Nothing... “ She cleared her throat, blushing brightly, “Okay well. Her boss is an idiot, that much I can say. He’s one of the best at his job, and he’s scary as hell. Captain Blitz himself, the gifted guard of Celestia’s forces.”

His full name wouldn't happen to be "Flare Blitz" would it? :trixieshiftright:

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