Inspired by my story, "Loving the Nightmare" -- Twilight Sparkle travels to the alternate timelines she saw while chasing Starlight Glimmer. Seeking knowlege, she instead finds lust, passion, possession and desire.
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Twilight's knowledge of Celestia being evil in the other world was kind of informed rather than first-hand. I have trouble buying this instinctive righteous hatred she would have for her presence. Like, I could imagine a close friend have an absolutely horrible doppleganger and being told all about her evil deeds, but I doubt I'd do more than look funny at my friend and wonder what the difference was (and in this case she already knows what happened differently).
OOOHHH COOOMMEEEE ONNNNNNN!!!!!!
.........punch celestia already...
.....opsss
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I had toyed with the idea of an "angry sex" Twilestia scene, to be honest.
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There's nothing "righteous" about Twilight's anger. Even she calls it irrational, unreasonable and wrong. Which is why she is going to be able to master it.
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Perhaps that was the wrong word. I guess I mean why the instinctive hate when she never even physically saw Celestia there?
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Fair enough. "Instinctive" made a lot more sense than "righteous".
I was honestly hopping that you would get back in the action as soon as possible, but I think this detour is interesting and open ups an aspect to the story that I didn't expect. I hope that Twilight will suck off the twins as a relapse, that would be fun to watch.
Good chapter
Quite wonderful as always. But my poor roof Celestia how could you!
I got to admit I am loving how this story is going so far. Heck I even regret asking you to move a bit faster through the first arc there you doing wonderful story telling, it engaging and twisted. And in the end these interludes are just what I needed for a palette cleanser before all hell breaks loose again.
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Honestly, I thought that was going to be celestia's third option.
Well, glad to get that weird little incest thing from the last chapter cleared up, but I feel like I might have influenced your decision to do that. Is that the case? I'm really sorry, I didn't want to warp or twist anyone else's writing to suit my needs, just had a rant to clear off my chest.
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Don't feel bad. I wanted to subtly bring out that while Velvet can abstractly appreciate her daughter in a collar and tight black outfit it will never be anything more than that. After your comments last chapter I did decide to be well...blunt about it. But that's okay. It made for a nice scene to show Twilight beginning to re-assert herself back to becoming the Twilight of old.
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Okay, thank goodness. i didn't want you to fundamentally change some major aspect of your work based on a semi-coherent rant
It seems like everything is shaping up great, even if we don't get to see Twilight Velvet and Twilight Sparkle end up having hot incest lesbian sex (please let it happen). The only things left is after Twilight Sparkle, 413 and Alyss are fixed are to find go back, find the old controller and the elements, and help Queen Chrysalis free Princess Luna from Princess Celestia.