Sighs Celestia ...i hope she taken dwn hard and made to pay big time!

Flu is terrible. I wish I had as good an excuse!

Edit: Wait no actually I don't.

8055530 removed form power for sure. but what of Cadence. She should have found away to stop this?

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The fate of Cadance and Shining Armor will be revealed. At this point, I will simply say that it isn't possible for Cadance to intervene.

8056311 I thought you said Twilight wouldn't be captive much longer.

With Flim and Flam using brainwashing while she sleeps, she'll get programmed much faster now. It would only take around 3-4 days of hearing the voice while asleep before she's completely brainwashed

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I know, I know

I'm desperately trying to resolve the plot here as fast as I can while still retaining a coherent story. My plan...plan is for the next Cog chapter to be the last one, it might be a long one though. Sometimes I really do need to rein in the world building, I currently have something along the lines of 6,000 words of background for this story already. Large chunks of which will likely never see the light of day.

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While The Voice is a problem it will still take a bit of time depending on the person. As long as Twilight keeps hers wits and catches herself like she did in the last chapter she will be able to last longer. The best thing she can do is try to explore the suit for weaknesses because all things have their limits. Just like how wood or rubber will explode if you run enough electricity through it, the same might be true for the suit. That or she could try to trick it by temporarily killing herself

8056984 I don't mind it. I'm intrigued by what you think happens in the worlds we saw in the episode.

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Well, the thing is, each of those worlds was turned at a crucial point because Twilight and her friends weren't there. The key question for many of these worlds is "what is that point?" and then writing what played out differently from there on. Also, fyi, Damaged and I have been having some interesting discussions about the Chrysalis world, as well as the repercussions from her current trip.

Any of you who follow me, should now by now I don't do "status quo ante" in my stories. Twilight's current and future cross-time adventures will have ongoing effects both on her and those around her.

So quick question when you wrote them being placed in cum cells, do you mean they are feed cum or forced to cum in their cell?

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Neither. I was using the word in its proper, dictionary meaning.

cum
preposition
combined with; also used as (used to describe things with a dual nature or function).
"a study-cum-bedroom"

8058774 huh learn something new everyday.

are you planning on doing alternate/bad endings bonus chapters ? like : twilight become the slave of flim flam etc , bassicly one for each universe she will go to , dont need to be super long but would be fun for peoples who like those kind of bad ends etc

isn't it super speedy cider squeeze 6000?

I loved those books, I still have the full series in my collection, though they're starting to show their age, even the reprints that they are. Pretty amazing how we're far beyond the tech in those books in some ways, and way way behind in others. Knowing the books like I do, the thought of Twilight speaking for Boskone is actually pretty hilarious.

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What book series is it?
More importantly, is it on audible?

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The Lensman series by E.E. "Doc" Smith. No idea if they are on Audble though.