Inspired by my story, "Loving the Nightmare" -- Twilight Sparkle travels to the alternate timelines she saw while chasing Starlight Glimmer. Seeking knowlege, she instead finds lust, passion, possession and desire.
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Wouldn't it be ironic if Twilight was the last surviving direct descendant of Decius? Although knowing our luck it's King Sombra or, more likely, RainbowDash.
Liking it so far. The Rainbow Dash, Dashiel, and Pinkie moments are the best. I still figure that at some point in some fashion the fact that one Dash and Pinkie got together may start some interesting conversations between some of these characters. I really like how Pinkie helped here and Dash also trying.
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Oh, I've already got who Decius' descendant is. One hint, without spoilers, it's a pegasus and not RD.
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Question: How is "decius" pronounced?
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‘Cursed with terrible visions’...Derpy has terrible visions. Two of them. She always sees two different things, but never in the clarity of proper, two-eyed vision.
All Hail The Muffin Queen! Derpy! Proud and Proper Slave Owner of the Royal Sisters!
Thank you for your stories. Thank you, for coming back. And hope you'd finally defeat for good that thing that tried to eat you inside.
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Derpy?
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DEE-see-us
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Like I said, no spoilers.
But that would be funny as hell.
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Thanks, and glad to have you back
Where the next trip will be? Chrysalis? NMM? Discord? Daybreaker? Tirek? Tantabus? Storm King? Starlit Glimmer? Or The Empty Wasteland?
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Chrysalis or Daybreaker
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Wonder what Daybreaker's method of brainwashing is... But love Chryssi's methods already... Oh, woe is me, who'll be better is a mysrety! Oh, woe is me, I can't wait to read and see!keyassets-p2.timeincuk.net/wp/prod/wp-content/uploads/sites/30/2015/10/rocky-horror-peter-hinwood.jpg
Two issues.
One: Roam doesn't exist anymore so the laws that bound the sisters should be void.
Two: of sisters formed Equestria then explain Hearth's Warming.
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One: the sisters are both traditionalists, as are most hyper long lived individuals in fiction. A lawyer could probably argue what you say effectively, but the sisters still consider themselves bound by the laws of Roam.
Two: Was not Hearth's Warming created by Princess Platinum, Chancellor Puddinghead and Commander Hurricane and it was the actions there that provided the impetus for the founding of Equestria? As per the events of Hearth's Warming Eve?
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Actually I was confused by that. If he had written in his will that they were to be freed upon his death and clearly due to telling the story the Sisters know of this how come are they still slaves? He died and he wrote in his will that they would be free upon his death. I do not see his last command changing that fact. If they treat the laws being in effect then they should be freed due to the clause in the will. If the laws are no longer in effect then they are no longer slaves due to their being no law for it in effect. Either way they really should not be slaves anymore.
Also why is the title "Interlwed"? I thought maybe it was supposed to be word play combing interlude with lewd but since it is not full of crude sexual anything I am starting to wonder is this a spelling mistake or am I missing something.
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Yes, but they can't exist in the story you tell since you say the sister's founded Equestria. So continuity issue. Yes I know this is somewhat AU but it sounds like canon events did happen so the dister's story throws some chaos in this.
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Is this the part you mean?
However, Crimson makes a good point, and the will may be an error on my part. I'll dwell on it a bit and consider removing the bit about Decius' will. Oh, and as regards the Interlewd chapter title, it was done to somewhat follow the pattern set earlier in the story.
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Just that how can their be leaders of the tribes when they all come from Roam and the sisters lead them.
Also that was crimson asking about the titles. I got that from the start.
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I'm sorry, but I don't understand what you're driving at. In the timeline I'm running with...
- Celestia and Luna had their own small mixed tribe
- Were captured and enslaved by Roam for at least 20-30 years.
- Roam was attacked and fell.
- Windigoes begin to range far and wide, causing Earth Pony and Unicorn tribes to begin to wander along with Roam's survivors under Commander Hurricane.
- Celestia and Luna also wandering at this time with Decius' survivors
- Events of Hearth's Warming Eve.
- Equestria's initial foundation.
- Celestia and Luna arrive some time later with Decius' survivors.
- Due to their alicorn nature are acclaimed rulers of new nation, those with them begin to rise in authority due to their connection with the alicorns.
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Ah, does feel well explained in the story. Granted you been silent for awhile so i may have forgotten it
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Editor reminder:
Next was Chrysalis
It's nice to see an update to this story, and as always I look forward to more of your wonderful writing.
Cheers, love the story
I really want to complain at you for causing me to become all emotional as a result of reading this story, when all I was looking for was "harmless" (in the real world, not to the characters involved) naughtiness.
I really want to complain and grumble because I don't normally get emotional at stories, at least not this kind of emotional. The kind where I want to give everybody involved a hug and brownies/cake/other comfort food, and I get all sniffly.
Dammit, Penalt.
Well written.
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Yeah, that's the thing about Pen, he can take harmless words and make it into something emotionally beautiful