Inspired by my story, "Loving the Nightmare" -- Twilight Sparkle travels to the alternate timelines she saw while chasing Starlight Glimmer. Seeking knowlege, she instead finds lust, passion, possession and desire.
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I'm Discord's uncle if control isn't you know who.
8113092 I'm curious as to who you think is Control. PM me and I'll tell you if you are correct.
calling it Control is Celestia.
Umm I enjoy the story so far, but I was kind of Hopi g you were going to take her to thither worlds. Is that still a thing your doing in this story?
8113379 Yes, very much so. Each world will have it's own chapter or arc of chapters. The final chapters of "Cog" are already written and are just going through editing and reworking of some sections before I publish them.
I predict control is Cadence. Celestia is control for Luna. And twilight of this world is just unaccounted for.
BDSM time
8113379 well he did say the cog ARC so he's probably going to finish this first.
8113397 A few chapters ago this world's Twilight was mentioned to be a guerrilla who had been causing the brothers no end of trouble, to the point that one of them would become enraged at the mention of her name.
Thank you for such a fast reply. And yes I totally did miss the little blurb at the end there. Still Cadence is best controller.
Oh man, this is getting interesting. I find myself rooting for Twilight to keep her sanity and break free, but the twisted side of me kinda want's to see what will happen when/if she breaks.
I really hope Twilight takes Trxie from this world with her.
Interesting story so far, betting control is rarity or someone similar.
Kinda want the cog story line wrapped up soon as i personally don't like the storyline or plot as it is. I want to see the interpretation of the other worlds.
8113861 It will be. We are in the home stretch.
Smiles, "Happy to help, and I agree about Door Belle, I really just consider m'self a proofreader, so the amount I fix depends on the writer's skills, the better a writer they are, at least at the basics (it astounds me how many stories show up here with spelling errors, and not just one or two mistakes), the less there is for me to contribute, she on the other hand has mad skills."
8118382 then it's worth taking down. And this isn;'t captialism but tyranny.