Inspired by my story, "Loving the Nightmare" -- Twilight Sparkle travels to the alternate timelines she saw while chasing Starlight Glimmer. Seeking knowlege, she instead finds lust, passion, possession and desire.
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So, considering what was illusionary Rarity doing.... is it selfcest?
Awesome update, I love how this Twilight is overcomes her conditioning and the skill sets on both Trixie and Derpy.
Interesting turn of event, would love to see clop with Twilight be the broodmare of Sombra
Captain, huh? Hmmm, we've been repeatedly told that a pony that looks like a friend could instead be a Sombran spy. Who was it, now, that said they'd been captured by Sombra, only to escape?
Tungul did have points. All the crap Twilight is going through it will be hard to see her as the submissive one in the relationship. Still love this story but yeah a hard look at how you progress wouldn't hurt.
Great chapter.
I think that this story is coming along great! please continue to provide such amazing stories, I beg you.
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I will. I mean I do listen and read all the feedback I get from you folks. A lot of it has really helped me become a better writer, but as I said, this story keeps pushing me somehow. It makes me fight for every sentence and paragraph. I like that.
Oh boy, now we get to see how Twilight feels about the tall, dark and handsome type.
I've changed my mind on how I decide to read stories on this site and will instead re-read it once it is set to complete.
Otherwise, I lose all interest, suspension and feel to the story. If you don't know what I'm talking about, it's the equivilent of playing the first chapter of a game, then waiting "X" amount of time until I play the next chapter. Then about 6 months later I get next to no response when I finish playing it because, my interests have moved on or I forget what happened.
I still support you and what you do, I'm not trying to act entitled by saying you should pump out more chapters, I'd rather let you have more time to write. I'm just going to change the way I view these stories...
It is literally impossible to get a Red Dwarf reference past me
https://youtu.be/7wu-adBvqj0
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Now that I think about it, the entire chapter is just a reference to the start of season eight